|Reviews for Rebirthing|
| jesterinblack chapter 1 . 1/4/2013
i really love how you tell people whats what in the beginning i should be more like that instead of letting people push me around in my fanfics.
good story btw its really interesting
| Snafoo Cerious chapter 6 . 8/20/2012
Heyla! Just finished readin this for the first time and I'm jumpin up and down in anticipation for the rest! Now I didn't read this when you first posted the chapter with the porn, if I had I would have sent you a hundred or so reviews on how I liked the way it was done,so pleeeeeeeeeze don't cut out the porn! I'm a housewife whose hubby is temporarily,er... shall we say disfunctional,and this is the only way I can seem to deal with it. So for the sake of all of us "blue balled" ladies out there PLEEEEEEEZE don't cut out the porn! :P
| edxwinry4life chapter 1 . 9/20/2011
EdWin Owns your shitty story
| EdxWinry4life chapter 1 . 9/20/2011
You say Winry looks like a cow?
Well you're mom looks like Rosie O Donnell
You are an ugly fat ugly girl who is jealous of Winry
| edwin chapter 1 . 9/20/2011
Hey your story sucks ass
EdxWinry is canon
Like it or not
Edwin owns your a ss
| dd chapter 1 . 9/20/2011
Your story sucks
EdWin rules b*tch
| cynder81 chapter 6 . 9/17/2011
Good chapter! I liked the first thing Roy did once he was out of solitary was to sit naked in the sun. The nickname mad Marvin for that one guy was great. The truth seems interested in his relationship with Roy.
Looking forward to the next chapter!
| Kitsune Demon Girl chapter 6 . 9/14/2011
Lmao I like how Ed's going around broadcasting to everyone that he's not fond of Mad Marvin, especially people who don't know who that is XD
Yay Roy's out of solitary confinement! D
I thought you did really well writing Izumi, I love her character and you portrayed her pretty well 3
| luvsanime02 chapter 6 . 9/12/2011
Mad Marvin seems like an interesting character. Poor Ed though. I’m sure he’d much rather deal with Roy ;D
Aha, I kind of liked Ed playing chess with Truth. It reminded me of that special order chess set you can get from the manga.
Snicker. Al can’t hide anything from Ed, really. And OMG, what the hell did Winry do that for? Hasn’t Ed been punished enough?
XD You actually wrote naked Roy meeting Izumi! And it was hilarious, btw. I mean, Mustang’s pouting, and she basically tells him to grow a pair, even though she can certainly see he already has a set XD Her attitude is dead in-character, though perhaps a little less violent actually. Loved the attitude from both of them.
Al trying to sneak out the gate was pure win :D Smart boy. Too bad it’s Izumi, and she survived a month in the wilderness of Briggs by herself.
Yes, Ed, definitely show those letters to Maes. Hopefully, he’ll see it. I’ll say it again, poor Roy D:
Valiant was gold. Good rec for everyone :D
| Deactivated. Ciao chapter 2 . 9/12/2011
Masterbates should be masturbates.
BRITISH BISCUIT! Do I get a cookie now?
BTW: Freshman, sophomore, junior and senior are the first four years of high school OR college, respectively.
| SaphireWhiteWolf chapter 6 . 9/12/2011
first thing I saw in my inbox and I had to check it out!
Well, I'm gonna actually read the chapter now... ;
and as usual, awesome! I personally thought that your Izumi was accurate, especially considering the situation that Edward is in. She tends to treat other people with the usual respect that most people give each other but I liked how you made her all "You're a weak spineless piece of crap who needs to get his shit together!" at Roy. Though it seems as though she would be doing a bit more damage to the brothers, since they are her pupils. But I digress.
GOOD LUCK WITH UNI! *balloons and confetti fly everywhere* here! have a cake *gives cake*
| Hawkpath13 chapter 2 . 8/4/2011
I love this story! It's really funn to read. When I read that part with the word 'wanker', I nearly spat coffe onto my screen. After choking for quite some time, I managed to cough out, "WHAT THE HELL IS A WANKER!"
OH! And one more thing!
Quote- Why do some authors insist on having themselves have a conversation with Roy or Ed or some character from some show in here and make them totally OOC? *shrugs* I don't see the point, really xD -Quote
I'm insulted! D: I do this all the time, and their very in character. Many people do this and their in character. The point, mind you, is to be fun-ny. We are trying to make you laugh. It's comic relief. Huh!
| TobiBlack chapter 5 . 8/1/2011
I'm sorry for not reviewing earlier, but this is I have to say, my favorite AU RoyXEd pairing. When I think of RoyXEd, this is one of the first that comes to my head.
| ASD chapter 5 . 7/30/2011
Gasp! What's that secret thing mentioned towards the end? I have my own theory but I hope you update soon! As for the quality of the chapter, don't worry. lol. Wonderful as always.
| Madarao The Authoress chapter 5 . 7/29/2011
I write my own porn. P I just thought a review on the porn would be nice, so I gave it. Because I'm awesome like that. Plus, I like reviewing; if I can make someone feel like I do when I get review just by doing the same for them, then I call that a good deed and a success. Because, I swear, I feel like I'm on cloud nine when I get a review. xD
Anyways! ... Edward needs to bitch slap that guard so hard he won't be able to see straight for a month! That way, Ed can get into Roy's cell and FUCKING COMFORT my Roy! He's making me sad. And I don't like when Roy makes me sad. So, yeah, he needs to get out of solitary confinement now so he will smile again! I like his smiles.
Update! Now! Or do I need to start sending you random messages that read something along the lines of "I'm watching you~ (But you can't see because I'm a fucking ninja so just STFU.) Update. Now." It would be a lovely reminder. So. UPDATE! I want moar! DO WANT MOAR! (I really need some fucking sleep. -.-)