|Reviews for Heels|
| LadyBigoud chapter 1 . 1/18/2012
| DominusProvidebit chapter 1 . 7/12/2011
She got laid by CAL bitch! Oh yeah! I liked it. Lol I also liked the distracted Gillian from the game. Good stuff .
| Zivacentric chapter 1 . 2/28/2011
OK, this is officially the first "Lie to Me" fic that I've read, even though I love the show. I found this through someone's favorites who put one of my stories on alert, and I'm so glad I did. I loved this! Honestly, you had me at the words "Super Bowl" :D as I love football. Gillian's reaction to the game was HILARIOUS and realistic; really enjoyed that. Also loved the whole bit about the heels - and the fact that she came in the next day wearing them as well. :D Nice job.
| nikkidog chapter 1 . 2/8/2011
I started reading and had to stop at the comment about the commercials and open up a 'word doc' to write my review.
Back to the story . . .
OK, I know she was messing with him about Glee!
OK, you win! I'll read the whole fic after that comment! ("It's the fucking Super Bowl, get it right!")
Yep, she got a little something cuz she was rooting for Green Bay!
| HughSoSexy chapter 1 . 2/7/2011
Hahaha! That was great! I'm glad the SuperBowl could inspire you. : D
| sash queen of the jungle chapter 1 . 2/7/2011
So flats do it for cal do they because he is a cute short arse? Wow callian got it together. About time. Thanks for writing and sharing is there anymore?
| BuzzCat chapter 1 . 2/7/2011
Love this story! First Lie To Me fanfic I've read, and it was very well. I guess my only complaint would be that when it suddenly got serious, I didn't sense any real mood transition. It was more like wham-bam! here you are in a serious mood. I didn't like it.
| kneelinfrontofthequeen chapter 1 . 2/7/2011
You've finally made me curious!) I've googled 'Super Bowl'. Now I know what it means xD And the idea about heels was great. I loved Gill's energy in your story, it's so natural. Thanks for writing it)
| LolaRedMuse chapter 1 . 2/7/2011
Well HOT, u r writing better n better lately. im so glad that i got to follow ur evolution! u r more fluent in ur story telling no diversifying too, this is crack/fluff or fluff/humor, totally different from the genre what u showed us in Extraterrestrial n yet its great! i loved it.
"Lead the way, darlin'." i think this wasnt just a lil killer line, cos of its meaning, but it could have also worked amazingly as an implicitly naughty kinda ending, as better than Eli's line: "I got it! She just got laid." wich was a bit too obvious to me at that point.
overall i loved Heels anyway n i must say that u tricked me with the title, cos i though that punchline of the story was gonna b Gillian in fuck me heels (not the lack thereof) n Cal drooling all over her. i never saw the Sperry's coming (i guess that the "mistery" part of ur genre tag for this 1, right?). when i saw the title of the fic was "heels" i said, i gotta read that, cos im a shoe junkie, but then the flats happened, lol!
-Gill cussing n being overly enthusiastic about the super bowl - i felt totally identified by that-
-this lil sexy moment here: "He walked around his desk never taking his eyes off of her. Soon he was invading her personal space, his face a couple of inches for her's." mmmm...
-killer line: "Lead the way, darlin'." wich leaves everything else up to the readers imaginations, thats why i would have loved it as the final line, but still remains being my favest even if is not :)
thank u :)
| Nagini85 chapter 1 . 2/7/2011
Thanks for this, it sure made me laugh! :)
| The Pianist's Touch chapter 1 . 2/6/2011
that was great. I like the idea of Foster interrupting the case with random football cheers. and the fact that it's the girl who is obsessed with the game, not the guy. lol
| Beckett NYPD chapter 1 . 2/6/2011
I don't know what it is about you folks that write fan fiction for Lie to Me, but I crackup laughing most of the time. I think it's because Cal is such a character.