Reviews for The Price |
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![]() ![]() ![]() the ending wasn't too cheesy, and the story rocked! |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is touching. It is not very developed as a short story goes but it is a nice piece of work that moves you. Your portrayal of Tai was good. Keep up the good work. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Your coming up with some of the greatest stuff. |
![]() ![]() you did it again! when are you eva gonna run out of ideas... |
![]() ![]() This story is great. I think you are very good at deep fan fics. |
![]() ![]() You're a teen? Al this time I thought u were 20 or something seeing how great your ficz r! |
![]() ![]() yeah.. you think that logan... cunt sucking quiif. |
![]() ![]() i do agree about the pic.. it's not very me.. but i think you are a little too focused on homosexuality.. i'm sorry, but i am not. the fact that you keep lunging back at it gives the impression you are a bit too hopeful... sorry, you'll find someone.. lol man you are a trip... try e-mailing me though.. saves the efforts of clogging up reviews with this game. |
![]() ![]() "Life is beyond the measure of mortal interments. It exceeds limitations and defeats Boundaries, it soars beyond the skies and sails beyond the oceans. Thus it's worth is Un-measurable... Yet a life only fully begins after it has known love, and through love's embrace it's price is set. In our world only love and life together as one are truly priceless..." LOL HAHAHAHAHAAHAHAHAHAHA shut up Logan! that is too much. What are you trying to pull? P.S your pic is Gay! it makes you look full of your self. " I'm Logan, I have a gay pic that makes me look full of my self, which I am. Tee hee hee." In the name of un ecnolaged writers! |
![]() ![]() ![]() you know.. you need to work on your flames.. from a writter standpoint this one was a bit too close to saying nice things.. but don't worry, there's plenty of other fics for you to shred on the grounds of sap _ |
![]() ![]() Cheesy! I liked the story and I'm glad Datamon got killed, but that part at the end, 'I've waited my whole life for you...you're my savior...blah blah' seems unrealistic. I know Sora's caring and stuff, but I just can't imagine any of the Digidestined saying that. They're kids! But this was well written and 'The Prisoner of the Pyramid' and 'The Earthquake of Metalgreymon' are my favorite episodes. The little insight thing at the bottom is kind of retarded, but whatever. |
![]() ![]() ![]() my goshness...that was so good i don't know what to say... |
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![]() ![]() ![]() That was a sweet fic. I liked it a lot. ~KK~ |
![]() ![]() That was sooooooooooooooooooooo pretty! So luving it! |