|Reviews for Reverse Destiny|
| Guest chapter 3 . 1/28
Update soon please
| O-I A whyyyyyy chapter 3 . 1/9
Whyyyy whyyywhywyhwywhywhwywhwywhywhwy ?! Such a cliffy is killing me this sooooo awesome! XD
| ougley chapter 3 . 11/24/2013
thank you :)
| FatesShadow83 chapter 3 . 10/20/2013
Love this! Would love to read more if the muse returns! :-)
| Dimensionist chapter 3 . 10/10/2013
Hm. This is a really good fic. Are you planning on continuing it?
| Zlatka chapter 3 . 7/3/2013
| froger495 chapter 3 . 6/28/2013
cant wait for the next chapter.
| uchihatetsu chapter 3 . 6/11/2013
you stopped this fic. It is regrettable. Naruto battle with history figure and further his skill in swords and seals is interesting. Hope you continue...!
| Nina Himmel chapter 3 . 6/5/2013
whoa unique and interesting...
i cant wait for more :)
| Arashi-Kage-Namikaze chapter 3 . 4/12/2013
| BYoshi1993 chapter 3 . 3/5/2013
I loved the story. It has great potential, in fact, it's already realizing that potential despite it being kind of general in Naruto's training (I kinda like it to be honest). I hope you come back to this story eventually in spite of the challenge of writing a story set in the past.
| Whispers in Alcatraz chapter 3 . 2/18/2013
I like this story a lot. It has a damn lot of potential to be a sizable epic. I really want to know what happens next with Hanzo and Naruto. Will Naruto stop the war for once and for all? Will he meet up the Ame orphans?
Anyway, on to the critique.
1. I can see no obvious grammar/spelling mistakes (but who knows, I may have missed some). Your formatting is comfortable to read (we all hate those obese paragraphs).
2. The plot could be improvised (like you said, you skipped on the training/world-building parts). I'll let it slide since I have a soft spot for time-travel fics.
3. All in all, this is shaping up to be a very good read. I do hope you'll update very soon and write this regularly. If not, you can always hand it up for adoption.
| luckyschoolgirl chapter 3 . 2/10/2013
| Mallari chapter 3 . 2/2/2013
Огромное спасибо автору за такой замечательный фанфик)
Очень надеюсь увидеть продолжение в 10 томах :)
| I Quit 2.0 chapter 3 . 12/24/2012
If you could…may you continue? This is one the best stories I've read…And it's not finished! PLEASE continue on with this story! I'm already hooked…just reel me in!?