|Reviews for Back to the Basics|
| Kamen Rider Raika chapter 7 . 8/23/2013
Wow. Just, wow.
This fic is really good. I've read other self-insert fics, but rarely is there something like this. Heck, I think this is the only self-insert that actually goes into the whole issue of the obstacles of blending in with the Star Wars universe.
I'd say keep on writing the fic, whenever you can that is. It's good and should not be abandoned.
| laelruin chapter 7 . 11/21/2011
Wow, that would totally freak me out. Grandma's in an insane asylum for years...now a guy's lookin' at her strange. Lol, very intriguing though, can't wait to see where this is going!
Keep up the awesome work,
| Azalea.Rose chapter 7 . 11/21/2011
Great chapter! Looking through hundreds if not thousands of planets has to be tiring. No, I don't think this chapter was choppy.
| Emperor Andross chapter 7 . 11/20/2011
I had to go through and read that chapter twice, I found that the bit about the Jedi possibly too subtle, I thought at first you were talking metaphysically about Corwin, and then when it became obvious that you weren't talking about him,I got really confused and had to go back and start the section again... But then I might just be slow...
Anyway, although I thought that there could have been a bit more padding between the three main chunks of the chapter, I liked the tone and the challenges...
| Azalea.Rose chapter 5 . 11/14/2011
I agree with this chapters, theme, most of us would be in shock, and the accurate portrayal of being unconsciousness.
Personally when it comes to ordering chapters, I'm fine with them being out of order, but whatever works for you is fine by me.
| Emperor Andross chapter 5 . 11/13/2011
Hi, great story, I like the idea, as that is something that frustrates me a lot too.
I have a few more ideas for you...
thrust into a world you don't understand, with no idea how you got there or if you can get back... I'd be bloody scared! this would perhaps be something between chap 5 and 1.
The other thing I hate, is when self inserts meet the Jedi or something, and just casually start talking with them...
BTW, I'm not sure whether or not you know, but you can reorder the chapters from the content/chapter tab in the editing section... that might be a way for you to put chapter 5 in first...
Keep it up
| laelruin chapter 4 . 9/17/2011
I've never seen anything quite like this. Its really very interesting. I don't think I'd be able to live without the sky and some form of vegetation; without my family too...Poor girl, learning a new language, how to read, can't even automatically look at a clock and know what time it is. I look forward to seeing what you'll do with this fic, where it will go and what plot will be integrated. I also like to see that you started this year and it looks like you haven't given up. (That would be tragic).
So keep up the awesome work,
P.S. If you write another chapter soon I'll review again! :) Just a little incentive...
| moved1account chapter 4 . 4/16/2011
Very interesting! I look forward to seeing more of this, it's very good!
| Azalea.Rose chapter 4 . 4/16/2011
I really like this fic, and self-inserts do often neglect does things! I look forward to future updates, as the lot thickens.