I like your HK, you got him really good :)

Great story! Hope you decide to write a sequel :)

I thought the Star forges already had their own master..

The Exile turned darky quite fast and the Sith...well they're overpowered lol

I love this :D

Nice job! :D

Your version of Darth Revan is a helluva lot weaker than mine. When I play the game, I

Jaina, darth caedus, is this some kind of poetic justice? Awesome story btw

That is big YES on the sequel, this is a great story. i hope you do make one.

Great story. Hope there is more but dont rush it until you have a full scope about what you're doing. I've done that before and it didnt go well.

Great chapter.

I say Sequel if you have the idea of how to do it. There has to be a way for Revan to beat Kahn. Just have to find it.

Please write a sequel! I love this story and I am truly fascinated by Emperor Khan and the Star Station. Perhaps in the sequel Revan and Bastila could be transfered to another star forge or something.

Good continuation of the relationship between Bastila and Revan, but now I am confused, now Revan has removed a good portion of Malak's biological body, his power in the force will decline so he is even less useful (Like with Vader)

Great start but I don't understand why Revan wouldn't kill Malak after he has tried and failed to kill him when he has another potential apprentice in Bastila nearby

Nice change, strengthen the Empire and allow Bastila to be the apprentice, well done.