|Reviews for Jealousy|
| Nemrut chapter 1 . 12/11/2013
Good smut, thank you for sharing this.
| Danny vs A Month chapter 1 . 11/10/2013
OOOOOOWWWWWWWW! OW OW OOOOOOOOWWWWWWW! God that was hot but you should have included some lightningXserah. Great story.
| eternalskyking chapter 1 . 9/22/2013
hihihi I so do love this story:) It'll be fun if you wrote something other but with these same pairing?
| rukamichi chapter 1 . 3/31/2013
that was a really fun read. thnx for posting it. keep up the good work you're doing writing these futa fang/lightning stories
| Fallen Templar 709 chapter 1 . 10/21/2012
Woof Woof! indeed. Very hot. I'm not much of a foursome fan, but I ship Fang/Light and Serah/Vanille like nobody's business, so this one has my vote!
| Major Mike Powell III chapter 1 . 5/7/2012
Well, well, soldier...
(Whistles) Dayum (Tugs on his t-shirt collar) Phew! Is it hot in here or is just me?
This was f-cking HOT. OO Hope-Bashing, a jealous Fang and Serah joins in the fun. YESH! OO Too bad Fang didn't do her. Lightning was hogging her to herself! LOL I still (Heart) this!
Semper-Fi! Carry on!
| Icy-Windbreeze chapter 1 . 12/10/2011
Wow, that was...hot! O_O
Serah is allowed to play with the big girls now? Nice! Need a cold shower though. Great story!
| KissLand chapter 1 . 6/15/2011
DAMN THIS WAS HOT! :D I LOVE LOVE LOVE THIS! AND LOL AT LIGHT WHEN SHE SAID "I THINK YOU JUST IMPREGNATED ME" HAHA FLIGHT IS THE BEST!
AND THE FOURSOME WAS JUST PURE SEXINESS. POOR SERAH BEING THROWN INTO IT HEHE I BET SHE HAD THE TIME OF HER LIFE ALMOST DYING OFF OF ORGASMS ;)
| Hotcutii3 chapter 1 . 3/25/2011
wicked hot! Jealous Fang is so funny. lol. I love how Lightning and Vanille double teamed it. :) Loved it, P!
| KantMissOut chapter 1 . 3/7/2011
my eye brows got higher and higher as i read this at one point im sure they where in my hair line lmao. this was great though and i loved it especially when lightning was like 'i think you just impregnated me'
| BuRiChiFaN chapter 1 . 3/2/2011
ohdear..THAT WAS F'N HAWT! ! xDD my favorite part was the flight..and LOL. fang impregnating light? XDD i like the idea. XD
i want mawr futa fang from you. XDD THANKS! xD
| Varshe Ashray chapter 1 . 2/23/2011
This is... HOT!SEXY! The headache that I've been having the whole night disappeared while I'm reading this! *Well it came back after anyway..* I need a cold shower..
| ShadowCub chapter 1 . 2/21/2011
| XfoREVer2009x chapter 1 . 2/10/2011
No words, I fucking love this. You have to do another! Or at least make this longer. I love when Fang gets possessive. XD
| FATE1106 chapter 1 . 2/10/2011
Love this story , love the way fang and lightning carry on and the end, love how serah gets terrified at the thought of doing itall again, love the fact that Hope ran out when they started going at it, great well done if you can write a story with this much sexy times in each chapter you would make me a very happy person :) keep writing great stuff!