Reviews for Second Wind
Jbcjazz chapter 11 . 3/14
Please continue this.! I read this all in one night. It left me in awe and tears. You have to keep going and get Fang and Lightning together again
Talhiri chapter 11 . 2/19
Hope you do update this at some point, it's a really good story
crimson.wolfie chapter 11 . 1/21
I know it's been a long time since the last time you updated and I just wanted to say you good work! I'm more used to read another kind of fanfiction (shiznat, nanofate...) and tomorrow I have the last exam of my college life and your story did a good work relaxing me. Thank you, I was nervous but now I can't help but think about Fang and Lightning with their children...

Thank you again )
megamar chapter 11 . 11/7/2014
please update
Avienda chapter 11 . 9/20/2014
Second wind, a friendly wager and brave new world. Pweeeeeaaaase update!

These stories are amazing! You are amazing! And my life could really use some amazingness in it right now.

Sorry for pestering you here and there. No..not really :P
angels123 chapter 11 . 6/29/2014
I love your story! pls continue again! i want to know what happened next!
Gcohen chapter 11 . 6/26/2014
First of all, wat an amazing story you got here! It really is something else. A lot of fics tell about Fang coming back after weeks and months from crystallization...but 13 years? Talk about heartache. Is such a shame this great story is no longer active because is so great. Meaby one day you'll come back with more? Eitherway, thank you very much for writting this.
hief chapter 11 . 6/24/2014
sigh... gotta agree with Tara, this fic is a masterpiece. You have a refined way with pacing, characterization, plot-movement, and the overall mastery of the meat of a good story. Even with those heavy hints, Fang's distress and complete withdrawal made it easy to dip with her mindset: her climactic scene with Light, the gorgon pup ( the memories) and Ragnarok/Miss PTSD as an explosive culmination was nothing short of brilliant, my fav scene - amazing work.

And it just got better, which was hard to believe. As sad as I am that this sweet read is abandoned, I'm so thankful you didn't rush any of the character progression - Fang and her family's (i.e. Ari, Av, Light) especially. The distrust bred from 13 years of absence as a fierce need for self-preservation as their last defenses was genuine and heart-wrenching but completely respectful of realistic pacing. Millions of kudos.

Overall, this fic is one of the few I definitely will come back to despite its RIP status; it's satisfying enough for a ride, even if the tracks ended prematurely and we were all thrown off to drown in Fangrai purgatory for a day or two. I won't get my hopes up since it's been more than a year, but hey just know people are here, still hyped for that famous family trip among other things (e.g. Av's solo hunting trip with Pops; Ari's having that certain broken something being fixed; Lights final choice; Fang's future).

This piece is something special and it's completion deserves to be waited for.
Guest chapter 11 . 4/7/2014
Awesome story, read it 2 times in the span of a week! Love the way you effortlessly give all of your characters realistic depth, and bring them to life. Hope you get around to continuing this story, probably the best and most believable Flair on this site! :)
TheLastSuperSaiyan1987 chapter 11 . 2/8/2014
great story, though I am a little worried since well its coming up on a year since an update, I want to know if Light and Fang get back together! please update soon!
Arrietti chapter 11 . 12/8/2013
I really hope that you will continue this wonderful story someday. I couldn't stop myself spending hours reading this. It was so sad with almost close to nothing happy moments.
Thanks for the story!
Knight-XIII chapter 11 . 11/15/2013
Is this on hiatus? If so then booo...just kidding. I get that life gets busy, but I figured that I would review and let you know that there are people still interested in your works and we are waiting eagerly for your next update.

shamanic demonator chapter 11 . 10/1/2013
This is awesome:)
Tara chapter 11 . 8/13/2013

another brilliant story abandoned
MeleVas chapter 11 . 7/1/2013
I've been reading this all day, I can't wait for the next chapter. This story really made me feel fang's suffering WHAT HAVE YOU DONE TO ME, I love it though I hope you will finish it someday no matter how long it takes.
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