|Reviews for Fix You|
| kstewrocks chapter 16 . 2/25/2011
But she needs to really get away, with or without Tyler.
A whole new life. Away from Aly. Away from Jake.
And away from the police...If it turns out she's to be arrested, hopefully she'll be far away having a chance at living some other life or whatever life she goes down.
But mostly away from Aly. If Tyler loved or loves Mallory, he'd prove it by giving up on a friendship with Aly, and following Mallory.
| kstewrocks chapter 16 . 2/25/2011
Just read through sixteen chapters. When will the next chapter be up?
It was indeed an angsty chapter.
If I was Mallory, I'd just leave. And get away. Go somewhere unexpected, instead of Lois' and Doug's. I actually thought instead of crying she'd go back into prostitution. But somewhere far away from where she is now.
I love her's and Tyler's relationship, but to feel unwanted so much. It's not good.
However it pans out, it'll be good. :)
| accolafied chapter 16 . 2/25/2011
I'm so happy they made up! Such a beautiful love story!
| accolafied chapter 15 . 2/25/2011
"Who knew two broken people could heal each other but I knew it wasn't going to be that simple" I felt this line really spoke about how real Mallory and Tyler's relationship is. That's why I love this fanfic! This love is raw, and realistic, has its ups and downs- just like real love is; and not just something fake.
| Hanna chapter 16 . 2/25/2011
I love the story it's amazing can't wait for the next chapter to come!BTW where do you come from? Iam from Sweden
| Trollbert Pattinson chapter 15 . 2/24/2011
Damn Aly. xD Damn Jake! Lmao can't wait until the next chapter!
| starsshot chapter 15 . 2/24/2011
I think Aly and Jake are just trouble, but trouble is needed to make a story interesting. I don't mind when you write cliffhangers since you update so quickly.
| Diamondgirlpau chapter 15 . 2/24/2011
Agh! I really don't like Aly, hahaha I didn't like her in the movie neither, and poor tyler, he will have to do a lot of good things for Mallory to exit the dog house :P
| Diamondgirlpau chapter 14 . 2/21/2011
Wow another chapter in less than 3 days, that is amazing! :)
It was a great chapter, I really like that Mallory tells her decisions directly to Tyler and I like that he finally realized that life is too short to keep living with resentment.
Can't wait for the next one XD see ya.
| Trollbert Pattinson chapter 14 . 2/21/2011
Poor Tyler! But I don't think his dad could ever change. Is Mallory gonna have more time with Caroline? I would like to see them interact more :)
| accolafied chapter 14 . 2/21/2011
Mallory's emotions really showed up well in this chapter, I was tearing up as I read the part with Doug and Lois. Great job!
| Thats-So-Alex chapter 13 . 2/20/2011
I really like this! Good job! Cant wait for more!
| laurenisawake chapter 13 . 2/19/2011
I love where you're taking this. The way you're introducing the new charterers is seamlessly. It's flowing wonderfully. I think I got as scared as much as the charcters did with the "Pregnancy Scare" I'm so partial to non-parents when I read this story I guess just because I can better relate to it? I mean I've read tons with that have been wonderful, so please feel free to take this wherever you want they're your words. I'm rambling now (I had 2 glasses of wine so forgive me ha) Regardless, the chapters are the perfect length I feel for your first story and I'm so glad you've stuck with it. I can't wait for the next alert in my inbox! I hope you have an amazing weekend (What't left of it anyway)
| imtheswanqueen chapter 13 . 2/19/2011
keep it up! :D
| Diamondgirlpau chapter 13 . 2/19/2011
Wow, I just yesterday finished reading the first 12 chapters and now I have the next one, that's great!
I really like that Mallory didn't runaway to Indianapolis, and that Tyler ask his father for help!
Can't wait for the next one :)