Reviews for Spin the Bottle
NovaWars chapter 1 . 4/18
These stories continuously bring me to tears damnit. The story started off sub par, not something really interesting but once that net came down , it all bloomed i to an amazing story. Love it.
StarTrail chapter 1 . 2/12
There were tears towards the end :') but i loved every sentence
Ivoryrose777 chapter 1 . 2/7
OH MY GOD I CAN'T BELIEVE THEY DID THAT!
Can you make a sequel?
Illucida chapter 1 . 1/12
Oh goodness. I had genuine tears in my eyes and I was starting to choke up. Thank god it was a genjutsu...but even if it was just a genjutsu it showed how far they would have gone, that they would have genuinely died in each other's arms.

Ah man, I'm such a mess (emotionally) right now.

Great work.
Punintentionally Forgetting chapter 1 . 1/11
why does everything hurt so much oh my god
Downcast Rainbows chapter 1 . 12/5/2014
The angst is so suffocating iT'S BEAUTIFUL OH MY GOSH. How does a person even begin to write sadness so potently; all I can imagine is sitting at the computer, blinded by the tears yet somehow barreling onward and writing a fic. This is so wonderful.
Yami no Tsuki chapter 1 . 11/1/2014
You made me nearly cry on the bus. That is not okay.
The ONE day I wear make up...
GaaraLuvCookies chapter 1 . 10/19/2014
This. This made my heart painfully hurt. It made me so sad inside that I feel so empty when Sakura said those I love you's. And then BAM. The plot twist comes. But still, I really cried. Keep writing these type of stories and make us cry. Please. Kudos to you.
HawaiianSunsets chapter 1 . 9/20/2014
I hate you and love you and hate you SO FREAKING MUCH RIGHT NOW-

Be proud, dude. You are incredibly gifted.

It's not often that a story legitimately makes me cry. It's even less often that a Naruto story makes me cry. And believe me, as a hardcore fan of the amazingness that is Team Seven, I've read a shitload of T7 fics.

And yet, here I am, at like 1 in the fucking morning, crying my soul out while writing this review.

This one blows every other out of the water. Instant fave.
kurgaya chapter 1 . 8/26/2014
That was absolutely gut-wrenching and I loved it and it hurt. I have no words. (But that's a good thing).

Thanks for writing!

kurgaya
New and Old chapter 1 . 8/17/2014
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O.o
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*Hopefully Sasuke will listen...*
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O.O
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Nooooooo...
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ToT
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Noooo! ToT
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*wipes tears*
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The above was my reaction to the entirety of the story.
Yes.
You are bloody good at writing team dynamics.
I agree that team 7 is quite dysfunctional. But the way you write it... oh gosh I have angsty-heartstrings pulling when I try to remember the story... makes me feel sad for them... and hope that in the other story, ricochet, team 7 will have a happy ending at last...
ToT!
Dudeeee it's your fault making me feel depressed about a possible tragic ending! And it's raining over here too! Makes me feeel supersupersuper sadddd! (But I'm secretly glad that you are writing an angsty story... Cuz I'm a sadistic person like that, loving to read tragedies where there's plenty of pain and suffering for the characters...)
BoutsofInsanity42 chapter 1 . 8/10/2014
I do want to point out one thing. I know it's a genjutsu and all, but really, Naruto being unable to outmuscle anything? Not happening. I am of the opinion at a certain point he just laughs at anything trying to out power him. Not when he begins, but the Kyuubi dying to Chakra webs? Not happening.

Anyway, I like your stuff.
Guest chapter 1 . 8/6/2014
The story was amazing, moving, everything. But it would have been nice if you could have added Sasuke, Sakura and Kakashi's POVs too.
Guest chapter 1 . 8/6/2014
This is so beautifully written, just incredible. One of the most emotional, heartbreaking fanfics I've ever read. Honestly I wish it were longer, amazing job! Seriously, your work literally blows my mind!
The Living Oxymoron chapter 1 . 7/24/2014
Descriptive, touching, heartbreaking, and just plain beautiful. This was a nice one-shot.
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