Reviews for Well Chosen Words
Catty chapter 1 . 2/8/2011
Pretty Good! I like the way you've written this, a thought per line. It's kind of edgy, like Lindsay's thoughts are tumbling out and she can't stop them.

Well done.

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afrozenheart412 chapter 1 . 2/8/2011
This one has been your best one to date, not only could I feel Lindsay's pain but it was like having cut glass raking over my skin. She was hurting so badly and you could see that Danny was too.

My only personal objection was Lindsay's words about Rikki, but that is just me. Otherwise this is fantastic!