|Reviews for Live in the Moment|
| iloooveinuyasha1 chapter 1 . 8/25/2012
A dark chocolate ending for Susan and Marcus. I love it! Dark chocolate is flavorful, semi-sweet, but sometimes bitter. I feel you captured Marcus quite will especially in this style of speech. I could practically hear him speaking the words you had written. Thank you for this fic; it was quite lovely.
| ShadowCub chapter 1 . 5/13/2011
Marcus Cole, creepy and a stalker, I saw that sacrifice as another way to ingrate himself in Susan's life.
What a slimy character.
| zha'aiacole chapter 1 . 4/17/2011
This is a beautiful story! Thank you so much for writing the story I have waited so long to read!