Reviews for Captivity
Rosy009 chapter 11 . 2/26/2013
Oh mi gosh! I've been following ur story a while now and I'm loving it! Update soon k! ;)
GoldenFoxGirl chapter 11 . 1/6/2013
You need to write faster! XD I'm curious as to what will happen if she is with child...wonder what her Bozu will think...
xxxIloveKISSHUxxx chapter 10 . 11/19/2012
O.O
Sooo incredible
L-lettuce... with child? Wowwwww
Thanks for your job
Is an exellent example of your great imagination
Well bye bye!
AngelsLunar chapter 11 . 11/16/2012
omg what a shock love it
AngelsLunar chapter 10 . 11/8/2012
im loving this story so far so good
Blueberrysweetheart chapter 11 . 8/31/2012
Sorry for the PC :(but you can still write more kaitel and put them up :) I really love this story :) and like the way that the guard is in love with Lettuce: P Update when you can
Bubbel chapter 11 . 7/25/2012
I hope to read more soon...
But I dont get why did Ringo and Berry had died-
Kisa Kisshu chapter 11 . 7/16/2012
Oh no! I hope you find your computer again or get a replacement! Boo you to whoever stole her computer!
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I do really like the plot of this story. The idea of it is just very interesting and I know I will continue to follow it. I do feel sorrow for Berry and Ringo though...especially Ringo, since her death was pained unlilke Berry who went right away. Although there life when they were alive wasn't very good they had there companions in their cells...
Oh, and go Lettuce! You got two guys, well aliens, in love with you! Or maybe not love...
And I am glad that Purin finnaly found her Taru-taru-chan, na no da!
To the person who was writing bad reviews on Ambercatlucky2, well: Stop, because first of all, I know you sure wouldn't like it. And do you even have any stories on Fanfic or are you just some super-stalker? Why do you even bother reading any of these stories if all you're gonna do is hate? Hey, don't hate me fer saying this. Just expressing my opinion, here. Feel free to ignore this... -
As for suggestions...urm, let's see. Try checking over your grammar once or twice more. There aren't too many mistakes but a few here and there. Otherwise, hmmm...try keeping the tense of the story consistent. (But overall, you seem to be doing a good job with both of those things.)
Good luck getting your computer and the files back! Grr you, the one who stole Amber's computer!
Ciao!
-Kisa Kisshu 3
ShadowsAngel1 chapter 11 . 7/5/2012
will this not be finished?
Littlespottedcat chapter 11 . 6/28/2012
hope you get back on track this is a good story even though berry and ringo died but it is still good
xxxIloveKISSHUxxx chapter 11 . 6/25/2012
Don't worry Amber-chan

I understand you and I think the other fans too

Poor of you, I hope you are good

Mata ne!
sesshy-owl chapter 11 . 6/24/2012
I really like this story so far. Keep it up!
MewKisu chapter 10 . 6/19/2012
Nya! Thanks for putting the anonymous reviews back up! I'm too lazy to sigh in. This is sad but amazing at the same time! I punched the air in happiness when Pai came to Lettuce's rescue, yet I cried when Ringo died. That's so sad! Please continued soon! K? Wow this is my longest review ever. Please update soon! I already said that, oops. :D Arigato for writing this! XP

Mew Kisu .
Ern Estine 13624 chapter 11 . 6/15/2012
really good, can't wait for more.;D
jenoker chapter 11 . 6/13/2012
*winces* That's awful that someone would take your computer... I'd be so angry if someone took one of my notebooks. That's where I write the rough drafts for my stories.

I hope you can remember what you wrote so you can rewrite it.
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