Reviews for the true apprentice
rosemon2 chapter 2 . 3/29/2014
what happens now
Mr. Nine chapter 2 . 11/23/2012
this story has potential and i hope to see it progress
demonhunter44 chapter 2 . 8/1/2012
u should hurry up with ch 3 now im not sure when u can implament thise but at a later ch u shouldhave naruto go bak to khona and get some scrolls 4 training
SharkXD chapter 2 . 3/13/2012
He used to wear a blue swimsuit thing and had D cup breasts?
Blaze501 chapter 2 . 3/5/2012
Cool story update it soon.
Damix96 chapter 2 . 1/23/2012
interesting story-line
JaCk-o'-LaNtErN 91 chapter 2 . 11/18/2011
it was alright
The Swordslinger chapter 2 . 11/16/2011
Nice fic, just work your grammar a bit, it's kind of hard to understand but it's still enjoyable...I might write my own Naruto/TT like this one, I dunno
Takai153 chapter 2 . 11/15/2011
Interesting concept. I like it when a villain trains Naruto and I've never seen Slade train him, so props for originality. The harem looks great too. I would prefer this to be written in a 3rd person format rather than first person, though. Especially since you keep changing from first to third at random points. Other than that, keep up the great work and please update as soon as you can!
goka no doku chapter 1 . 10/12/2011
gotta say im not relly for the angelic naruto or the insane "hey lets go on a massacre cause im bored" naruto but i like the kinda blend of both just make sure that he doesnt freak if and when he kills someone anyways plz keep on writing it will probably help me with some inspiration for my story
Adeste fideles chapter 2 . 8/4/2011
i like it keep up the good work. good work on making slade look good and the discription. updated soon or else.T.T
Chaos009 chapter 2 . 7/11/2011
Im a fan of the story, and just wanted to say that I REALY liked it. I cant wait 4 the next chapter.

Ps. Cyborg's cannon is called the "Sonic Cannon." Name says it all.

Pss. If u dont know the name, or cant remember somthing about Teet Titans just place your question in, or at the end of your story and ill try to get back to u as soon as possible.
GaaraHinataWake chapter 2 . 6/28/2011
Nice chapter,It was pretty interesting and I liked it alot. However the author notes in that chapter were getting kind of annoying, it broke up the story and made it kind of confusing, so next time maybe think about not putting them in there, other than that keep up the good work :D
Matheusae3 chapter 2 . 6/26/2011
Your story is awesome, continue writing!
chaosciaran chapter 2 . 6/22/2011
I really enjoyed this story please continue
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