Reviews for I Spy
Shay1026 chapter 31 . 8/20
absolutely wonderful!
Guest chapter 31 . 8/5
so soo sooo beautiful! i love every single chapter in this story! thank u for sharing this ure awesome! xx
Brad chapter 22 . 7/22
I mean Ron's reaction is pretty in character, but I feel like the events that led to it were pretty contrived, to be honest. In light of the fact that both Harry and Hermione were told well in advance about Dumbledore's unavoidable death, it doesn't really make sense for Ron to be left in the dark about it, or about Draco's fake plot to 'murder' him, as well as his continued role as a spy.

It makes even less sense given that Ron was aware of Draco's role throughout the year, and it was planned in advance for Ron to be joining Harry and Hermione looking for horcruxes; it's an obvious source of conflict that Dumbledore, Snape, or Remus would have easily forseen.
Brad chapter 21 . 7/22
Wait so the locket from the cave wasn't a fake in this fic? It seems like kind of lazy writing to just change important details with no justification.
WriteAwayMaam chapter 6 . 7/9
Oh, noooooo! I sure hope that Draco doesn’t have to kill them, but that would be naive, wouldn’t it?
OracleGuessMe chapter 31 . 5/1
I really liked this...the nott thing through was rather unwelcome for me to read
Guest chapter 29 . 4/3
Word of advice! STOP using the word cood all the damn time! There are other ways to describe
xXxJustLivingLifexXx chapter 31 . 2/7
I loved rereading this! Great story!
Anon chapter 29 . 1/26
I read through the piece in its entirety.
The character development was better than most fan fictions at first but after the first 17 chapters or so it seems like the author gets tired and clunky, forcing the ideas with blunt text.
There wasn’t any real smooth build up to any sort of pregnancy and the whole idea seemed forced in order to prove how pure their love was.
The fanfic had a fun foundation but the author got lost on our way and instead of plotting out the path just shouted “and Draco got Hermione pregnant, Bad guys are bad but good guys are pure and thus we win”
The author seemed to force the last half, even the editing gets sloppy. In one chapter we go back and forth referring to “Remus” and “Lupin” by his first or last name interchangeably which made for dizzying reading.
It’s okay to let a fic die, if the muse is gone.
Guest chapter 31 . 12/29/2020
this was by far my favorite dramione fanfic ever! it was super fun and i had a great time reading it. your writing was outstanding and i could really feel the characters’ emotions. however i would say that there could have been a bit more detailed when describing a room or situation. either way- you should be very proud of yourself cuz this is a work of art️
WreckedXX chapter 6 . 12/8/2020
WHOAHHH WTHHH chap 6 and shts already hitting the fan omggg!
thoushaltnottpass chapter 19 . 10/10/2020
Yep, she is definitely pregnant... Poor Draco, he doesn't know.
I wonder, will he find out soon?
thoushaltnottpass chapter 18 . 10/10/2020
Is Hermione pregnant?
thoushaltnottpass chapter 17 . 10/9/2020
Wait... No Contraception Charm?
triojediknights chapter 1 . 10/7/2020
What an excellent beginning! Can't wait for the inevitable smut! Btw, you hit 999 reviews on March 13th, 2017. Congrats for reaching 1,111 reviews on October 7th, 2020!
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