This fic started out so strong! Unfortunately it really went down hill in the last half imo. Important canon plot points were changed with no explanation and it ended up just feeling a little ridiculous by the end. I think it could have been so much more if the author didn’t go for a pregnancy trope as well.

this was wonderful. thanks for writing

Love this!

Ahhhh. Wish they could have protected Hermione’s parents ahead of time. *crieessssss

Enjoyed this so much

Loved the story. Felt pretty fast-paced, but that’s a welcome change from all the not fast-paced fics. Thank you for the story!

absolutely wonderful!

so soo sooo beautiful! i love every single chapter in this story! thank u for sharing this ure awesome! xx

I mean Ron's reaction is pretty in character, but I feel like the events that led to it were pretty contrived, to be honest. In light of the fact that both Harry and Hermione were told well in advance about Dumbledore's unavoidable death, it doesn't really make sense for Ron to be left in the dark about it, or about Draco's fake plot to 'murder' him, as well as his continued role as a spy.

It makes even less sense given that Ron was aware of Draco's role throughout the year, and it was planned in advance for Ron to be joining Harry and Hermione looking for horcruxes; it's an obvious source of conflict that Dumbledore, Snape, or Remus would have easily forseen.

Wait so the locket from the cave wasn't a fake in this fic? It seems like kind of lazy writing to just change important details with no justification.

Oh, noooooo! I sure hope that Draco doesn’t have to kill them, but that would be naive, wouldn’t it?

I really liked this...the nott thing through was rather unwelcome for me to read

Word of advice! STOP using the word cood all the damn time! There are other ways to describe

I loved rereading this! Great story!

I read through the piece in its entirety.
The character development was better than most fan fictions at first but after the first 17 chapters or so it seems like the author gets tired and clunky, forcing the ideas with blunt text.
There wasn’t any real smooth build up to any sort of pregnancy and the whole idea seemed forced in order to prove how pure their love was.
The fanfic had a fun foundation but the author got lost on our way and instead of plotting out the path just shouted “and Draco got Hermione pregnant, Bad guys are bad but good guys are pure and thus we win”
The author seemed to force the last half, even the editing gets sloppy. In one chapter we go back and forth referring to “Remus” and “Lupin” by his first or last name interchangeably which made for dizzying reading.
It’s okay to let a fic die, if the muse is gone.