Reviews for Flotsam
Guest chapter 12 . 3/14
You have skill in developing your characters. You're able add details to make a full story without making it feel clumsy. The dialogue was clever and well thought out.

Thank you for sharing this.
Guest chapter 12 . 10/27/2016
I love the build up toward the romance; it was so awe inspiring
Whoviana Ravenclaw chapter 12 . 6/9/2016
Wow. I have just one comment, and it is that I love Friendly Severus. lol. I love that wicked sense of humor-deliberately weirding people out and everything _ Great, great story.
Snaperipper chapter 12 . 3/31/2016
Very cute.
riskeybusiness chapter 12 . 5/19/2015
Loved it!
Jani chapter 12 . 2/2/2014
Great story! The romance, or lack thereof, fits these characters. It's sweet for them and that's all that matters :) (Due to some language, should this be rated T? I'm not sure if website kicks off stories for that violation or not.)
I really loved the setting...can I go for a two month vacation to the beach now? And the whole relaxed, but with underlying serious problems atmosphere or tone. And your ocs were good (Danny, and his family, the bad guys). Curious about the Dept. Of Mysteries' mystery :) Also really liked the "supporting cast" of Harry, Ron, and even the little we see of Luna and Minerva, etc. Lovely story! Thanks for sharing it with us!
Dimac99 chapter 12 . 1/28/2014
Loved this, esp the sense of Severus still being very damaged underneath it all. And wasn't Danny a lovely surprise! I'm just sorry the sequel isn't finished.
r99smith chapter 12 . 12/30/2013
great story! loved the ending - thanks for writing
I M Sterling chapter 12 . 11/28/2012
LOVED it! Now I must dash off and look for the sequel.
nolongerinuse11223344556677889 chapter 12 . 9/10/2012
This was just perfect! Hilarious and sweet and cute and just perfect! :)
nolongerinuse11223344556677889 chapter 3 . 9/10/2012
I was going to leave a review to tell you how much I'm enjoying this and how many times I've burst out laughing, but then this evil cliffhanger happened. Must keep reading!
Mystical G Panther chapter 1 . 3/20/2012
Kelsey.writes.fanfiction chapter 12 . 9/23/2011
I loved this entire FanFiction. I didn't want to leave the computer for nearly anything once I started reading this! There were a few typos/word errors, but hey, we're all human! I loved how you wrote Severus. Heck, I enjoyed how you wrote the whole dang thing. I will be reading more of your work, that's for sure. So be warned. I will be back. ]


BulletTimeScully chapter 12 . 9/9/2011
Oh, yay! It was a wonderful ending... don't be worried. I love Danny, and the fact that he slugged Severus for being such a berk. Everyone needs a friend like that. :) I'll definitely be looking up your other stories, so thanks so much for sharing this one! It was just what I needed. :)
BulletTimeScully chapter 11 . 9/9/2011
I'm loving this story... but I'll be absolutely devastated if they don't have a happy ending! I know RL is like that, but after all they'be been through, they deserve a HEA... Beautiful story... now I'm off the the (hopefully happy) ending. :)
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