Reviews for You Could Be Happy
Snapecharmer1 chapter 1 . 7/29/2012
Gorgeous. Poor DCI Hunt. I feel like crying for him, all alone. So I think I will choose to believe your ending instead. Much more in character.
theHuntgoeson chapter 1 . 2/13/2011
Why on earth do you need to set songfic competitions when you write then so well yourself? This is so beautifully written that it's moved me to tears, not least because of the appropriateness of the song. It's wonderfully descriptive, and probes so deeply into Gene's feelings, accepting the fact of his love for Alex when he thinks that it's too late. "I should have stopped you from walking through the door" - oh, how true! And the memory of his childhood zings in so unexpectedly. I never expected that she'd come back, that was a glorious surprise, and the ending is perfect. Thank goodness Someone up there decided that she should come back!
sash queen of the jungle chapter 1 . 2/12/2011
Never too late to post ashes to ashes stories. They have slowed down but I dint want the writers ever to stop. Nice alternative ending with a happy ending. So who's place do they go to? Thanks for writing and sharing.
LionessOfTheQuattro chapter 1 . 2/10/2011
That Is So Weird I Have Been Thinking About Doing A Songfic To This Song For Ages - I Love Snow Patrol - But I Never Got Round To It. You Did A Much Better Job Than I Would Have Done And I Loved How It Was Happy At The End Even Though Thats Not What Happened In The Song )

Rachel xx
Pookyilicous chapter 1 . 2/9/2011
hahahaha Brilliant

I'll always try to read these fics, this one I really liked :D

Pooky xxx
beth88 chapter 1 . 2/8/2011
Sooo cute luvd it! V well written :) :D x
theoofoof chapter 1 . 2/8/2011
That was great. I'm glad she came back. Please write more soon.