Reviews for The Horcrux
Tien chapter 1 . 4/7/2014
Where is the rest of it? That's barely a whole thought, let alone a whole story
libros5 chapter 1 . 6/18/2013
There should be more to this story. Maybe not a novel but definitely more.
SpenceMeReid chapter 1 . 8/7/2011
I agree with your other reviewers. You should make this a novel... where Harry apologizes about what he had said to Remus, and explain why Remus was there in the first place. What happened to Ron, and will he come back? How does Lupin know about the Horcrux? You should write more and make this longer because it is actually really good:) Definitely add more.

Megan
Bloody Phantom chapter 1 . 6/12/2011
i agree with the previous reviewer..you should add more to it..like why remus was there..and how did he know..and what does it change..what about ron? explain more! its an interesting idea you got here..
Ainscough chapter 1 . 2/16/2011
What was the point? What did this add or detract to the overall plot? It's an interesting premise; feel free to explore it more thoroughly! What would have happened differently in the rest of the book? Would Remus still have died? Would Ron have been so easily forgiven? Would he have come back at all?

Just some thoughts!
8thweasleykid chapter 1 . 2/8/2011
pretty good, you should do different character in the same situation saving Harry