Reviews for Don't your fear me?
IROS chapter 1 . 2/9/2011
Your first story ever? Truly impressive. For one, because I like the tone of your story so far. Secondly, because you show an excellent command of details (like weapons), scene and scenery and characters’ particularities. English is not my first language either, but it seems to me that yours is pretty good as well. All in all, please keep writing. I am looking forward to your second installment and see what’s on the cooker for the team.
lynnmovielover chapter 1 . 2/8/2011
Your knowledge of weapons is definitely better than the average person and gives the story authenticity. The cliffhanger at the end of chapter 1 makes me want to read more. The second part of the story where you introduce Tiffy and Hector helps me to understand more about the characters and the background of the story. I'm curious about whether this story is all about one mission or several.
novelfan16 chapter 1 . 2/8/2011
This was a really great beginning! I really enjoyed reading it and cant wait to read more!