|Reviews for I'm Magic|
| The10thHatter chapter 1 . 3/15/2013
Are you kidding me id love reading stories about these two!
But not in oneshots, i suggest you make a new story with this girl in it!
You dont need to get rid of this cause this is genius!
Just start over and make them have a relationship instead of sexual tension... im abit wary of sex so just romance will do, but your story put whatever ya want
So im saying you shouls make another :)
| Saya.Hikari.Uchiha chapter 1 . 10/1/2012
Haha, that was amazing! Loved it.
| Ryn of Magic chapter 1 . 10/17/2011
more more more
| total-animal-lover chapter 1 . 7/19/2011
Amazing! It's about time Jane met someone who can measure up to him. I would be very interested in reading this story if you continued to write, but if you don't, it works nicely as a one-shot as well. You did a good job writing how Jane would act as a kid.
| Random Fan chapter 1 . 6/23/2011
AWWW SUPER CUTE! haha Just how I would imagine Teen Patrick to be! Great oneshot! Even though this is 4 months after you wrote it. Awesome job!
| maid in time chapter 1 . 5/19/2011
I was cracking up by the time I got to "wouldn't you know without looking"...
I personally find this kinds of fics, dialogue centric fics, rather delightful.
Sometimes it's kind of difficult to set the right pace in a story written like this, but I think you've got it nailed... n.n
You maintained the cheeky attitude Patrick has and your Jane Doe has a personality that matches it.
It was magic.
| Mental-Fan chapter 1 . 2/8/2011
Ok well I liked it, a lot...I'm not sure if the dialogue was a little hard to follow or it was just me but otherwise its cute...and I woulnt mind reading more :) good job
| the.shadow.of.smoke chapter 1 . 2/8/2011
Funny. ) You should write more. I can really see this being a story. I like how she's a perfect match for him, as in, able to argue with him effectively. You're really good with the whole 'witty comeback' thingy, and as someone who is unable to do that, I really think that's awesome.
So, yeah... write more or (virtually) die!
(...and yet, I'd end of resurrecting you anyway... ah, well...)