|Reviews for Truth Or Dare|
| SasonXShikamaru chapter 1 . 7/18
I think that you could have made this story a little longer and at the end when Kiara came over should have been separated off a little bit or placed at the start of the story to add more effect to it or something. Other than those its a good story and fun to read.
| jojoberry chapter 1 . 6/28/2011
cool story i really like how you write
| Mheeturules chapter 1 . 4/14/2011
SO CUTE! I love it!
| LoneWolf LUFC chapter 1 . 2/21/2011
Awooooooooo i liked both versions of this story, the only thing i would suggest is longer stories. Nothing fancy just a longer build up, and personally i'm a sucker for a few adorable awkward moments, work to your strength what do you like to write about the most in a story and play around with words
The Lone Wolf
| Starzinmieyez chapter 1 . 2/8/2011
This is so much better- much more realistic :)
| The Real Simba chapter 1 . 2/8/2011
Great improvement! Good job to the both of you! :)
| The Rogue Lion chapter 1 . 2/8/2011
Funny. This was not really how I imagined it. Oh well. Originally, I had intended for the idea to be a short multi-chapter story. This was actually a little rushed. I suggest you add more detail; set the mood and build up to the ending.