|Reviews for All That Is Love|
| pineapplesonsyrup chapter 26 . 8/30/2016
OHHH YAAASSS THEY SAY THAT HE'S BRUCE WAYNE! I love this fanfiction!
| lizzyu2 chapter 26 . 3/22/2016
hahahha love that song nice guys
| Lizzy-Margaret chapter 26 . 1/13/2016
I LOVED it! Seriously, I am half way through the series (Cartoon) and this was awesome!
| AstrologyQueen chapter 5 . 7/27/2015
I like the chapter and I'm not trying to be mean, but that wasn't the proper use of the word enigmatic, which means mysteriously, or ambiguously.
| Guest chapter 21 . 6/11/2015
It kind of bothers me that you firgot Belarus :/
| Guest chapter 7 . 5/9/2015
If u make robstar / bbrae fics later, u should have a titan(s) walk in on them! I don't know y.
| Guest chapter 26 . 7/13/2014
Either sequel or Plzzzz continue
| the cynical critic chapter 4 . 9/5/2013
you said rae/bb so where is the rae/bb?
| the cynical critic chapter 2 . 9/5/2013
bb and rae should get closer. ooh also bring bee for cy
| aceofqueens chapter 3 . 7/27/2013
Starfire is a bitch. I laughed.
| aceofqueens chapter 2 . 7/27/2013
I agree with Robin, that was rather creepy.
"Secret identities?" I thought they didn't have any. They sleep in their costumes so they can be ready at any time. They only have the one identity. Everyone except Robin doesn't even cover their face; what you see is what they actually look like.
Also, I would think it would be impossible for them to go in public. No human has green sclera like Starfire or bright orange skin. It's impossible to hide. Ironically, all Robin would've needed to do is take off his mask and not make reservations under "Robin." I'm surprised they didn't get swarmed by media.
Poor Robin. Why do all writers hate him? Is it for the Red X thing?
| aceofqueens chapter 1 . 7/27/2013
Alright, here on chapter one and i'm slightly annoyed and confused by your dialogue. It reads very awkwardly.
Once it was a misspelling, you referred to Robin as "her" and it made me think Starfire was speaking for three lines in a row. However, I think that's the only one I can point out. So good job. If I had written this, there would be way more than one.
The rest of the time, it was the lack of written text explaining who was talking. It needs a lot more "he said" "she replied" or "Beast Boy yelled" statements. It can get really confusing because you have more than two characters on "stage" at a time. If it was just two characters alone and they were talking, it would be okay to leave out "he/she said" because we can logically assume each character speaks every other line. But with more than two, it's important that you make it very clear who is talking. For example, at one part I thought Cyborg was speaking three lines in a row. I think it was supposed to be Raven in the middle, or maybe it was even Cyborg, Raven, Robin in that order. See, I still have no clue. With more than two characters, it's difficult to figure out who spoke by analyzing what was said.
That's another thing. If you're going to have a back-and-forth like Robin and Cyborg were (I think it was them?) then you must make it crystal clear when a third (Raven I think?) Joins in. You need a strong statement like "Blah blah blah," Raven interjected. Because, up until then, we didn't know she was involved.
I'm going to read more to be fair because it seems like it could be a good story. Hope this helps.
| runswithsquirls chapter 26 . 7/27/2013
beautiful last line. just beautiful
| Perfectionist chapter 1 . 7/27/2013
Hi, I know you come highly recommended from Kryalla Orchid, but I must admit I found myself distracted by the story's formatting. You write dialogue and the other person's reaction in the same line, so it seems like the person reacting is the one actually speakimg. It's really confusing. Hopefully this is an issue that gets worked out in future chapters, but for now it's really messing with my motivation to continue reading, which is a shame because Kryalla has so many fantastic things to say about you that I'd like to keep going.
| Chronos guardian chapter 26 . 6/22/2013
Great story! It's what they should have done in comics instead of having her marry every joe-shumo that showed up with a treaty on his hands. So sorry for Karras though, that had to suck.