|Reviews for Hopeless Search|
| Max Evelyn chapter 1 . 2/9/2011
awww that's really sad
| ulyferal chapter 1 . 2/8/2011
Except for some misspellings or wrong word choices, this is very well written and poignant. Use of a spell/grammar checker would have caught most errors while a thorough proofing would have caught the others. It's a sad story and one I'd have a hard time writing myself but you handled the emotions and hopes and lost dreams extremely well. Great job! Hope to see more from you.