|Reviews for Devotion|
| lilyflower101 chapter 12 . 3/8
Love it! :)
| lili200986 chapter 12 . 2/16
Wouah j'ai adorée ta fiction elle est magnifiquement bien écrit ! Bravo et surtout merci pour ce moment de lecture j'ai adorée ! Merci
| NYPDBURN07 chapter 12 . 2/11
Aww this story is so good :)
| Tasha Hill chapter 12 . 1/29
Great story. Write a sequel.
| Wolfisis chapter 12 . 8/19/2013
Lol..I really liked this the last part of this with the new suit I thought was so sweet.
| Umiko1967 chapter 12 . 4/8/2013
Type your review for this chapter here...
| A Troll chapter 1 . 4/6/2012
Wow, how stupid are the members of the NCIS fandom including you! Some time ago as payback for really mean reviews, to drum up interest in my fics and as a bit of a joke some friends and I started posting critical reviews under various names but mostly RAAA - Readers Against Arrogant Authors. We didn't think anyone would pay that much attention to them as they were clearly troll reviews but the over reactions (disabling anon. reviews, posting notes on stories/profiles, fics. defending me. and pms) of site members have been truely hilarious to read so we kept it going. You all fail cyber commonsense 101.
It's been too easy and now I'm moving on. You've been successfully trolled. ;-0
Belated April Fools And Happy Easter Everyone.
Herky Illiniwek aka: Erynn Phelps (find me on Facebook for more fanfiction fun) and the RAAA - Readers Against Arrogant Authors.
| jumango chapter 12 . 2/9/2012
I may not love you the same but i love you just as much.
| Azhmyr Athena Le-Fay chapter 12 . 10/3/2011
I loved it very much. Very well written. Great job.
| trout1986 chapter 12 . 7/3/2011
| Twilightfans chapter 12 . 5/12/2011
| ami chapter 12 . 3/7/2011
what a charming story! you are a wonderful writer! the story itself moved a little slow for me, lots of description that would be appropriate for something even longer but didn't clip it along for me. but! your writing kept me engaged and it was well-worth the read! seriously, great mechanics. keep it up!
| H.I. Fanfiction chapter 12 . 2/21/2011
LOVE THIS STORY! I read the last two chapters together and I say this story is getting better & better... please update soon! Hugs abound... - Erynn. :-]
| KatelynGibbs chapter 12 . 2/20/2011
"You thought wrong."
You killed my brain and made it work. I applaud your genius.
| FreekyDisaster18 chapter 12 . 2/20/2011
Oh that was such a cute end! Beautiful.