Reviews for What a Bust: Chp1
mantombi mdhluli chapter 1 . 9/18/2012
It was an okay chapter just need to go more into detail
Rylee Blade chapter 1 . 8/16/2012
very interesting :)
Adoxagraphy.Angelus chapter 1 . 2/9/2011
This is really good. :) Your writing has good structure and the way you wrote in first person gives the reader an insight on the fact that he didn't go to school or grow up in the best neighborhood. Watch the tenses, because I think I saw a few slips with that, but other than that, it was really good. :)

By the way, I saw that you had the other chapters up as different stories. This is the way that most Fanfiction authors put up stories:

Go to publish, and then to documents. Upload the document, and then go to my stories. Click on the story you want to update, then on top of that it should have a few settings. Go to chapters and it'll basically show you how to add the chapters. :)
PantheraLeo.815 chapter 1 . 2/9/2011
WOW, I can't wait to read more! This is good, a little short, but very good!