|Reviews for Against All Odds|
| ASPN chapter 2 . 5/16
couldn't login... account exp... Still gotta say this now... head exploding
This is one of the most pathetic Chuck Stories I have ever read...
Chuck's depression in third season and immediate recovery... that I could somewhat understand... he becomes full agent and still Sarah leaves him at first... but then again that was all a big misunderstanding (power of writers and their plots)...but then he saves Sarah and they live 'somewhat happily ever after'
But what you wrote... Chuck pours out his heart to Sarah at the marriage... who bye the way is also in love with him.. but then she chose 'CIA and Bryce' over Chuck... I get that too... Sarah is confused and all this is new to her...
What I don't like in this story and is completely PATHETIC is Chuck's reaction...He is drinking like no tomorrow on his only sister's wedding... he becomes a hermit in his house for a month... bashes with his sister who practically is his mother... Disses his future and everything just like that(even though now he is a graduate)... and don't have any plans to move on...
and For what
A girl who left him with practically saying that she is going on an open ended mission to save the world... RIIIIIIIIIGHT
OH and then most f*cked up part came... the phone calls...
Chuck is wagging his tail like a puppy as if the last month never happened... they are reminiscing like an old married couple now...
Oh and the best part... How the f*ck a civilian call Beckman to help
Chuck in the series was naive and was heart broken...
Chuck you write is completely PATHETIC and delved into OVER Obsessive behavior...
Ellie should have just smacked him one...
Oh sorry that too is Sarah's Job...
| Guest chapter 38 . 4/17
I just found your story and I loved it. I can't wait to read more of your work.
| baldcoder chapter 38 . 4/15
Great Story! Well done.
| Guest chapter 4 . 5/26/2015
Quite a piece of shit :D
| stars90 chapter 38 . 8/12/2014
Fantastic story! Great work with your characters, making them into family on a divergent path from the one we knew.
| Dsn246 chapter 38 . 1/17/2014
Great story! I really enjoyed the journey!
| Dsn246 chapter 35 . 1/17/2014
Loving that there is some action now! Though I do love the video game company arc
| Dsn246 chapter 32 . 1/17/2014
Was fully expecting the wedding planner to con them like in the show! haha
| Dsn246 chapter 26 . 1/17/2014
the Mass Effect idea was so awesome! I really liked that replacing the belly dancing scene!
| Dsn246 chapter 8 . 1/17/2014
I really like how you wove in scenes and lines from the show to complement your story!
| Dsn246 chapter 7 . 1/17/2014
Great chapter, but just a thought I had. you had Ellie read the letter that Sarah sent to Chuck, which in it says General Beckman's orders. So wouldn't Ellie find that to be odd and ask Chuck about it? If I got everything mixed up let me know!
| Dsn246 chapter 6 . 1/17/2014
Great chapter, maybe could be a bit longer with how Bryce is trying to still get Sarah back? or some actions scenes of Bryce and Sarah compares the two of them. Just a thought!
| Dsn246 chapter 4 . 1/17/2014
I actually love that you took the story in this direction, where Sarah leaves with Bryce. Very interesting, also you got me to be misty eyed a bit in this chapter!
| Guest chapter 7 . 12/22/2013
one can always tell civilians from military. civilians say 1700 hours military just say 1700
| Guest chapter 6 . 12/22/2013
yea yay i think that you mean yeah