Reviews for dance in the rain
lowi chapter 1 . 12/7/2011
Oh, Crazz, this was beautiful! It's a very different take on LilyScorpius, from /my/ perspective, at least! ;)

Your freeversing style in this is really beautiful, the formatting, the (rhetorical?) questions, it just flowed really well. :3

Fantastic work, I loved this!
Ninja Potter chapter 1 . 2/10/2011
Thank you, thank you! I absolutely loved it! All the lines were amazing and very poetic. I'm so happy! Thank you!
BlueEyes444 chapter 1 . 2/10/2011
:hearts:
lydiamaartin chapter 1 . 2/10/2011
This was wonderful, Mad! :D I loveloveloved Lily dancing in the rain - such a Lily thing to do ;) And Scorpius being shy (that is a WIN, right there) but eventually going outside and dancing with her was just so adorable and funny and awesome!

Great job, and keep writing!
renzhie chapter 1 . 2/9/2011
(sorry for the languange)

bloody hell, Mad. this was amazing and sweet and cute and put my freeverse into shame.

why oh why? XD

Not faiiiiiiiiiiiiiir. *whining*

Great job!