Reviews for Just A Little Harmless Smut
demigoddesses chapter 1 . 12/23/2014
! This was - wow. I really liked the way it slowly built up and then ended like that, gaaaahhh
Ducky chapter 1 . 12/10/2014

*staggers off stage left, falls into crowd, dead*

Holy mother of god that was good.

I like your writing. I really, really do. Good god this was hot. Sorry for being all over the place, but I generally try to post my reviews exactly as they come to me. And this is exactly how it came to me.

So yeah.

This fic is being bookmarked forever. KTHXLUVYOUBYE.
Jaylin chapter 1 . 5/10/2014
Good shit my nigga
Hella Hella Gay Y'all chapter 1 . 4/17/2014
*slams sequel button* SEQUEL! FUCKING SEQUEL!
EnchantedTwentyThree chapter 1 . 6/12/2013
This will always be one of my favorite stories. Perfection :D
TheWritingFreak chapter 1 . 1/29/2013
Well, it wasn't necessarily harmless but it was smut. And good smut at that... it made me laugh in a couple places and maybe a little hot under the collar.
This was great.
NinjaRawrSG chapter 1 . 3/28/2012
GodsDammit, I love your writing style and I'm really surprised your stories aren't more popular. Plz make more stories/update :P
Ms. Adler chapter 1 . 3/3/2012
God you write so well. I'm surprised your fics don't get more reviews. In the world of fanfiction, it's really rare to come across a writer who really fleshes out their stories, much less dares to so with an incest pairing and even less so does it fantastically. So thank you so much sharing your imaginative talent. Lord knows I enjoy it so damn much.
Star chapter 1 . 2/29/2012
I really loved this story and hope you make more like it very soon. It had a good plot and a really good build up. Keep up the good work.
CallYouByYourName chapter 1 . 2/11/2012
DAMN it, I love this story. And not just because it's smut. Okay, maybe a *little* because of that.

But honestly, the perfect back-and-forth, Alex's slightly-assholish mirth, and the sweetly poignant ending? Gah. You're killing me, here.

I also liked Justin's vulnerability and inexperience... it's just who he is, canon. Stories that paint him as an agressor always frustrate me a little, even though some of them are wonderful. And yeah - I think he'd have a surprisingly steep learning curve, too.

Awesome. More!
anonymous chapter 1 . 1/5/2012
Love love love this story!
Nur S'ba chapter 1 . 11/15/2011
I have to disagree with you that it was "an awful long way to go" if by "an awful long way" you mean to imply the ending was in any way not worth the time it took to get there. I think this is an absolutely delightful look at the pair of them, perfectly paced with an ending to match.

Alex's drunken amusement at sneaking up on her brother in front of a porn movie, and the delight she takes in his delayed reaction to her being there ALWAYS gets a laugh out of me, which means I can no longer read this in the same room as most friends, all family, and/or minor children, because ... well, try coming up with a lie on the spot that explains why you snorted your drink all over your lap. ("Mad libs. No, you can't read them. They're . . . in French.")

Alex's mention of her spiked-lemonade stand when she was little is also such a great touch. Alex in the show makes all sorts of allusions to her extracurricular activities, but of course it being Disney, she can't go into detail ("turns out the wizard kid's dad was a wizard cop, who recognized my voice from this other thing that you don't want to know about") so we're left to wonder. I love that you can get specific about it, and YES, of course that is such an Alex thing, I can totally see it. For far from the first time, I lament that this is a Disney show. Even Nick could have had more fun with it :P

Justin promising to square with T.J. was fantastic. I was as wide-eyed as Alex the first time I read it, and even now I get all warm and fuzzy for him, showing us that so rarely seen badass side of his personality, the one that's so rigidly repressed I half expect it to start oozing out his ears one of these days. It's absolutely believable, that driven side of him coming out in a less controlled way than it usually does, and it makes him and Alex seem more related, you know? Like they really are two sides of the same coin, and when the distinctions bleed together like that, I can see it that much better. Great illustration.

Their dialogue for this piece is flawless. You keep them in character the whole time, I know I've said before that's what I love about your Jalex work but it bears repeating, that when you write them they ARE them, even when they are doing things we'll never get to see them do. Discussing Juliet's sexual preferences, Justin's penis (weeble. Hehe) and everything in between.

I guess this is my really slow buildup to saying that I do not in any way mind a slow buildup, because you make them worth reading no matter what it is they're doing, just like when they are actually in character on the show (admittedly a rare occurence these days) I don't care what it is they're doing so long as they're doing it together.

Pun almost totally not intended.
Nitebreaker chapter 1 . 11/9/2011
I liked it. Admirable smut, with Alex taking the lead. I can't wait to see what happens next-full intercourse? Hope, hope!
Hearnishere123 chapter 1 . 11/6/2011
I faved you as a Author by the Disclaimer alone XD

If i could rate this i would give it 5/5 stars XD

It made me laugh my ass off till it got to the little harmless smut part of the story. but right after that i was lauging again at Alex's speechless reaction. The smut was great! LOVE IT ALL!
Marissa Davis chapter 1 . 8/8/2011
That was so freaking hot! Write more please you can go so far with it!
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