Reviews for World in Pieces
Cassandra30 chapter 22 . 10/26/2021
These two make an excellent team! Who is Severus going to leave the house to if he goes with Harry?
Hopefully Severus will be able to get his belongings from Hogwarts and Gringotts before he leaves. Can Harry take the other Harry's things out of Gringotts?
Why haven't they looked more at the diary?
Cassandra30 chapter 21 . 10/26/2021
Excellent story!
Cassandra30 chapter 20 . 10/26/2021
Way to go, Severus!
Cassandra30 chapter 19 . 10/26/2021
Cassandra30 chapter 18 . 10/26/2021
Albus sacrificed Original Harry thinking it would make LV able to be killed by someone else.
Cassandra30 chapter 17 . 10/26/2021
Severus can go back. Excellent point!
Cassandra30 chapter 16 . 10/26/2021
Wow! Circles within rings. A conundrum within a mystery within an enigma. Well written!
Cassandra30 chapter 15 . 10/26/2021
The attack by Remus could have been manufactured.
Cassandra30 chapter 13 . 10/26/2021
The Weasley twins are terrific.
Cassandra30 chapter 12 . 10/26/2021
Well done!
Cassandra30 chapter 11 . 10/26/2021
This Dumbledore is evil!
Cassandra30 chapter 10 . 10/26/2021
Good for Harry!
Cassandra30 chapter 9 . 10/26/2021
This Severus is what he needed in the first place.
Cassandra30 chapter 8 . 10/25/2021
Good reasoning.
shah927 chapter 25 . 10/23/2021
Beautiful story! Added to my favorites list.

Love how this is a more realistic Harry in terms of not having the perfect instincts of a fighter and the magic of Dumbledore from the war going on for decades after but Harry with some instincts and a lot of willpower and luck.

Love Snape in this fic. Felt like it was somewhat realistic to how he would have been in this world and my favorite was hearing his thoughts. I really liked seeing how this Slytherin Harry raised by Sirius affected the world.

Keep writing! You're great!
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