Reviews for To Surrender
amiebeca chapter 1 . 2/19
This is a brilliant story. It is very well written and perfectly in character. Even though Ziva is not a very emotional person, I could picture this scene clearly.
Thanks for sharing :D
Catmint chapter 1 . 2/4/2013
This is powerful, visual, heartbreakingly fantastic writing. Absolutely breathtaking. You've captured the emotions, the horrors, everything, absolutely brilliantly.
Anonymous033 chapter 1 . 7/9/2012
This was ... immensely overwhelming, in an excellent way.

I don't think I've felt quite as heartbroken in a long time D: the way you captured Ziva's emotions! So painful and terrifying; I could feel it and see it all happen.

And then she's snapped and is just leaning on Tony, trusting him to hold on to her, and my breath catches in my throat.

This is so beautifully written. I love everything; the characterization, the breadth of vocabulary, the cadence of the fic. I really enjoyed reading it.

Thank you for sharing!

dvd123 chapter 1 . 6/30/2012
The "We will be okay" is beautiful. Because if she isn't, he won't be either. The strong, steadfast Tony is always welcomed in moments like this. :)
zatl chapter 1 . 2/10/2011
This was amazingly well written. :D
Megwolf13 chapter 1 . 2/10/2011
I love it!
M E Wofford chapter 1 . 2/10/2011
Good story!

It actually made me get teary-eyed.

Poor Ziva.

I love the serious concerned Tony.
gsr4ever chapter 1 . 2/10/2011
Really great. Nice job!
VogueThousand chapter 1 . 2/10/2011
Awesome job ! XP
ChEmMiE chapter 1 . 2/9/2011
Absolutely loved it! Very well written! :D