Reviews for Etiquette
ArcanePracti-cat chapter 3 . 8/22/2014
I agree with "abhorrentredress" - while your writing is good, the concept here kind of disgusts me. The drama, the over-angsty hurt/comfort, and, of course, the - basically - slave training. also sorry for a negative review, but at least it adds to your counts, and it's not negative about your actual WRITING per se... :P
AbhorrentRedress chapter 1 . 12/10/2013
Your writing is pretty awesome and plot is well paced, but I must say that I fiercely hate the idea it is based on, 'submissive training'? Really? That's disgusting. This isn't suppose to be an insult against you, it's just that you make the situation into something nonchalant and I feel like you either don't realize or don't care to see how wrong it may seem. Ehh sorry reviewing negatively but I really really had to say something about it...
Kai Chen chapter 3 . 12/2/2013
Can we have a follow up of Neville's reaction?
Elis1412 chapter 3 . 12/1/2013
The ending was adorable! Good job and thank you.
Zephiraya chapter 3 . 10/27/2013
Very cute!
Anime Princess chapter 3 . 9/22/2013
Interesting...very COOL!
Shinningstar1998 chapter 3 . 8/17/2013
this was pretty good i liked it
Miss Lestrange chapter 3 . 5/16/2013
I love Harry and Neville but I don't like Draco...
Venus914 chapter 3 . 4/9/2013
Oh Draco! )
Venus914 chapter 2 . 4/9/2013
Draco is more loyal than Ron and Hermione. Even Seamus is very cruel.
Lizzosaur chapter 3 . 4/6/2013
Aww, how cute. I love Draco's plan.
lisa.demonic.angel chapter 3 . 2/1/2013
Hahaha I love it!
moonlitcat chapter 3 . 1/23/2013
Awwwwww! so CUTE!
Rhea.Lament chapter 3 . 1/7/2013
er just wondering... who was Draco paired with then?
wolfydies chapter 3 . 1/2/2013
This was so cute. I love in the last chapter where harry was trying to figure out how to tell Neville XD
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