Reviews for The Other Demon Lizard
xPrincessJupiterx chapter 4 . 12/27/2012
Very nice way to portray Fluffy. Keep it coming.
xPrincessJupiterx chapter 3 . 12/27/2012
You make new paragraphs too often, causing your sentences to be very detached and sometimes confusing. But still good so far.
Shiny Raichu chapter 1 . 5/6/2011
Interesting story, but it could be a bit longer. Just trying to help so don't flip on me.
ShaggyGamer chapter 2 . 2/12/2011
in reference to the last line... chp one... get a few more chips and some salsa and we can have a party. :D