| Reviews for Black Talons |
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   dovakinrules chapter 21 . 9/6/2014 Need to update please |
| JonHarper chapter 1 . 1/11/2014 Black Talons seem a bit TOO competent here. Getting the drop on Shepard like that is...highly unlikely. Not impossible, but highly feels more in line with a long planned Cerberus mission. Still, it's only the first chapter and I'm interested to see where this goes. |
| Shadow Tricked chapter 21 . 10/4/2013 When will you update? |
| JinxyBae chapter 21 . 7/23/2013 I get the feeling Jack is gonna be sent to fuck Shepard's shit up. |
| JinxyBae chapter 15 . 7/23/2013 Okay I forgive you for fucking Jack up. I wasn't expecting the G man though. That was certainly different. |
| JinxyBae chapter 10 . 7/23/2013 Oh god damn it you killed Jack... |
| Guest chapter 10 . 7/23/2013 Why'd you kill mah Jackie? D: |
| JinxyBae chapter 2 . 7/23/2013 I've never seen this pop up in my inbox, but I am indeed enthralled. Love it thus far. Nice premise. |
| SuperVegitoFAN chapter 2 . 7/22/2013 INteresting type of story... seen that type before... not wanting to be in shepards way... badass gets locked in, IMMEADIATEDLY shows the guards he/she wont be fucked with, and finds an ally. ive seen that before, last time was assassins creed 3 IIRC but thats NOT the best example... i do know farrax is gonna regret taking commander shepard it ALWAYS ends like that, that much i do recall. that and i do like this type of story. oh yeah hawaii 5.0 also has it early in season 2. works similarly, although then mr tonbay would be someone shepard put in there. |
| Shepard112 chapter 1 . 7/22/2013 Finished the whole story throughout the day. One of the best ME fics around. I hope you continue with this because this story is just too good to abandon. Keep up the awesome work. |
| Inverness chapter 21 . 7/22/2013 You'll need to provide a recap because I have no idea what happened previously or who all these characters are anymore. |
| SeaWolf90 chapter 20 . 4/3/2013 Great story but man you got to finish it. it that good of a story. |
| anon chapter 20 . 3/18/2013 Excellent story. Well written. Looks like another abandoned one. |
| ljovanja chapter 20 . 12/22/2012 I hope you didn't forsake this story, because I am really enjoyed that |
| HaywireEagle chapter 9 . 10/3/2012 That is a very good 'Garrus' Speech. I enjoyed that. |