Reviews for Maybe, Just Maybe
Unknowne Stealth chapter 1 . 11/3/2011
Aww, poor Bells...
x-twiilight-x chapter 1 . 3/21/2011
Wow, this is an amazing first chapter - I hope you update it because I'll be waiting for the next chapter. It was breath-taking, you couldn't have written a better first chapter in my eyes, I loved the detail, please continue,

Sam xx
xxxxx chapter 1 . 2/16/2011
i love this! add a kiss maybe (if you won't finish it)!
JadePlant2121 chapter 1 . 2/12/2011
This was really good, even though it ended not all too well, it was amazingly writen.
CoffeeBreaks boysinabooth chapter 1 . 2/11/2011
Thank you for the review. Yes, I will add that this story is, in fact, set in an Alternate Universe. The characters are all human.

Thank you for your constructive criticism. It took me 20 minutes to write the first half of the story, and then it (Writer's Block) hit me. I continued and wrote a sentence a day, then I finally realized that I was never going to finish this story.

Thank you again! I know I'm being repetitive, but thank you. Thank you, thank you, thank you.
Dallas Angel chapter 1 . 2/10/2011
I know this is suppose to be a 1 shot but could you add another chapter please
boysinabooth chapter 1 . 2/9/2011
This is definitely different from the series and the characterizations are a little out there. I feel like you didn't really give us the best of backgrounds, and it also doesn't sound like everyone is a vampire in your story. Is it AU? If so, definitely needs to be specified. It has potential if you can clean it up a bit with the background information. Too vague for my tastes. You have excellent writing potential, and your sentence structure is great. I didn't like one line...You said spill three times, and then wrote "sunlight spilled through..." I think that the word is overused. Hope you overcome your writers block!