Reviews for Uzumaki Legacy, Naruto clan
Guest chapter 22 . 9/14
I like to see a reading the book of story
yuki22hime chapter 22 . 8/10
this is really great story.
i like how you potrayed the character.
i also like the each storyline arc.
i can't wait to read more.
you awesome author.
hope will see next chapter soon.
Guest chapter 22 . 7/30
l like see new chapter
Guest chapter 22 . 7/5
L like see reading of story
Guest chapter 3 . 4/19
So hum your telling me that he had sex at the age of 7...SEVEN!? REALLY? Thats a little young if you ask me but who's asking? And she used him for his body...when she had a husband...FUCK THIS SHIT IM OUT!
Guest chapter 5 . 3/14
Knowed is not a word. It never was and it never will be. You might have meant 'knew'.
Guest chapter 3 . 3/14
Naive instead of nieve.
Guest chapter 1 . 3/14
Kinjutsu means forbidden technique. Kenjutsu means sword technique. Pretty sure the shadow clone is the first one.
Guest chapter 1 . 3/14
You keep writing thier instead of their. It is wrong. You have also butchered some japanese words. You don't have to use them if you're not sure. Maybe get a beta reader?
draco7347 chapter 22 . 2/6
really love this story cant wait for new chapters
Hadrian Eveningshade chapter 2 . 2/4
Good, but you have to edit your story,
Because there are mistakes,
For example, kenjutsu is sword technique, and kagebunshin is a kinjutsu which mean forbidden technique,
pawel.mackiewicz.pm chapter 5 . 1/13
_/
Guest chapter 19 . 1/3
Good story but would like to see a finish
johnrlozada chapter 22 . 11/24/2016
Please update. Even if you only do 5 chapters or less. I just want a closing. I've been hooked with this story from the start and liked every part of it. Hope you'll finish this story.
YeagerMeister31 chapter 22 . 10/29/2016
well this was nice can't wait for more
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