Reviews for You Can Have it All Revised
twistyguru chapter 3 . 7/9
Great story! I especially like what happened to Hermione. Talk about just desserts...
DylanL chapter 1 . 6/13
first of all i like the concept you are using for the story and feel that for the most part you are doing a good job so far. however i want to say that i do not like that section 2 happens chronologically prior to section 1 as it makes harry's letter confusing. second harry said to voldy that the letter to the prophet was already sent sometime prior to his getting harry's letter on the 28th but in section 3 you said harry was just tying the letter to the prophet closed on the 29th when hedwig returned with voldy's reply.
delia cerrano chapter 3 . 6/2
Delightful story! Even felt a little sorry for Hermione & Bill maybe even Arthur & Molly since they bought Peter's story & had no malice. But don't feel sorry enough to want the story changed except maybe Remus' suicide. I've always felt sorry for him...never got a fair shake after being bitten but he didn't try to help Harry. And Severus? Well he's special...I've always felt he got shafted also with bad childhood and those bullying boys and no help where he should have been able to expect it. Tonks? Not crazy about her ever...don't her changing hair, eye color ect also she is a little tomboyish for me.
adafrog chapter 3 . 4/5
Good, thanks.
Shamrock1100 chapter 3 . 12/29/2014
I have one thing to say...Serves the Witch right.
Guest chapter 3 . 12/8/2014
sequel! sequel! sequel!
is there already a sequel? I didn't check.
if there isn't...
chain.reader chapter 3 . 11/25/2014
I like your writing style,
Not all stories have to have a happy ending.
willowskeith chapter 3 . 7/27/2014
Good story
thingshavechanged chapter 3 . 7/16/2014
very interesting. very well written and it was a great read :)
herart chapter 3 . 2/20/2014
The letter to the prophet was a bit childish, like and angst 11year old rather a 16th. The third chapte came a bit fast.

Goos story to read.
kelwin chapter 3 . 12/17/2013
good fic but very sad. I would have liked it to be longer oh lets say over a mill words but we can't always get that lol good fic really enjoied reading it
regfurby chapter 3 . 11/14/2013
Excellent story.
madnessdownunder2 chapter 3 . 10/31/2013
Go Harry! Very nice!
d1x1lady chapter 3 . 9/7/2013
Wow! You are an amazing writer. Love your story!
Senju Serena chapter 3 . 4/3/2013
...that...was really satisfying somehow. Great job and hope you could something like this for the naruto series, if you ever watched/read it
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