|Reviews for Seed a Barren Sky|
| goichi chapter 12 . 2/26
hope this isn't abandoned and i hope for an update because you are doing a really good job without adding oc's. i want too see kira's and lacus romantic relationship be expanded more then what it was. and i also want some murrue, mu,shinn,mayu,kira,and stella friendship and i also hope that you have kira and cagali's brother and sister thing expanded and known. but anyway i hope that your doing alright and that there is nothing wrong.
| Name Under Construction chapter 12 . 1/27
Will Luna be appearing soon? I'm really enjoying this story so far.
| Guest chapter 12 . 10/4/2013
great story! great chapter! please continue!
| mfmxxx chapter 12 . 9/11/2013
Maybe have Mayu mention her susipions to Mu? Would be interesting to see him get involved.
| mfmxxx chapter 9 . 9/11/2013
Its really good.
I like how Kira is still the main character, a lot of Gundam fics have the other pilots be marysues and take Kiras role.
Id like to see the Kira-Marrue and Kira-Mu friendships develop, one of my favorite things about the universe tbh
When Cagalli finds out she's Kiras' sister, is she gonna be jealous of Stella?
| Yuriski-1st chapter 9 . 9/8/2013
Sorry if maybe I talked about this before, but...I always thought Rau knew very well who (or what) Kira was the first time Athrun mentioned him. I mean, in canon there was never a moment when Le Creuset thought to himself something like: "Holy shit! I had the person I hate most right in front of me the whole time!"
| Freefan1412 chapter 2 . 8/14/2013
I re-read this and I noticed you described Stella as Cagalli-like with similar eyes to Kira. That's interesting. Supposedly, if eye-color can change because of Extended-drugs or as a result of Kira's high gene manipulation, this could mean a lot.
I'm looking forward to finding out more.
| Freefan1412 chapter 12 . 8/11/2013
Nice work. :) I'm rooting for Mayu here that she'll do something about Flay (needles to say, I can't stand her).
I wonder if it makes a difference that Kira gave Shiho and not Yzark a scar. Shiho doesn't strike me as the type to obsess about it, but on the other hand she is the lone female of the team and some kind of protectiveness and consequent anger might come about.
Keep it up and I'm looking forward to an update. :)
| Freefan1412 chapter 9 . 8/11/2013
Well, isn't this interesting. I don't think I have ever read quite a story like this. I like it, though. Shinn isn't an idiotic fool (yet) Kira and Athrun both have more support. Haro isn't forgotten and you don't stick too closely to the script that it sounds dead.
So far, it is very nice to read. :)
| worldwanderer2.0 chapter 12 . 6/25/2013
Please don't abandon this story. For an AU, it's amazing how all the characters remain true to themselves, especially Stella and Shin, and how the story remain nearly the same but with amazing plot turns and twists to make it all the more unique and interesting. I especially love Stella and Kira's sibling relationship, it was so cute and it's gonna be even more cuter once Cagalli joins in the fray. And there were times for me when Mayu steals the show completely in some scenes. You have got to continue please...I'm begging you! Are you gonna do a KiraxCagalli pairing, or KiraxStella pairing? If Stella's gonna be with Shin, can you please do KiraxCagalli ? Twincest is wincest! I never really liked Lacus though she's preferable for Kira compared to that mapulative racist b*#tch Flay. She's was always too much of a Mary Sue character for me anways.
| lex chapter 12 . 6/11/2013
this is an amazing story , all of the characters remain true . there is rarely any gundam seed fanfics that do that and you are also the first one who hasn't used oc characters which i find amazing . i hope you haven't abandoned this
| chm01 chapter 12 . 5/30/2013
I'm guessing this time around shiho was the one who got scarred, shame, she was cute, adn I liked your portrayal of her, and see ing how Yzack ended behaving after getting his face rearranged in canon i cna only wonder what changes shiho will undergo.
| Rydan fall chapter 12 . 5/10/2013
Gundam 00 and Seed Destiny.
Atleast that are a few ref's I can see.
I do hope they can get a couple off pieces of the Blits, a Noir style striker pack with Mirrage Colloid could be fun.
| Rydan fall chapter 5 . 5/10/2013
You forgot the shopping list of oppertunity in the last chapter (page 4), it could be used to fix the fourth unit.
And Shinn's sister could start working on a new OS for that unit by using copies from the OS of the other three.
Bet you that each went about certain problems in a different way and one of them might be easier then even the original in it's control of that certain problem.
Taking apart the Blits if at all possible, would be a good one, since it would give them data about the Mirrage Colloid.
Always wondered why the Strike didn't have a striker pack with Mirrage Colloid.
Suggest that when the equiptment theft (Ethernal) from Zaft happens, that this also incluses blueprints and if possible, research data.
Knowing what to expect is what can make or break a battle, that is, if you still let that particular event happen.
| Chocolate and caramel chapter 8 . 4/11/2013
*imagine Cagalli's face when Kira introduce their adopted sister and the two tag-a-long siblings when he tries to tell her that she's not alone in the world after her father dies*
yup, definitely want to read that chapter!
ganbatte, imma want to read more