Reviews for Seed a Barren Sky
Blue Bragon chapter 12 . 4/13
Still very good, still great, I really hope you would update this, but I don't think you will. Still thanks for all.
Guest chapter 12 . 1/2
dont you dare kill Shiho!
dragon shinobi chapter 12 . 11/6/2014
i really love your work, but after you finish a few chapters of Jinchuuriki 9, can you PLEASE update this, or tell us its status as a story?
Chocolate and caramel chapter 1 . 10/7/2014
Imma want to read chapter 11... *lying in a puddle of boredom*
rayningnight chapter 12 . 8/21/2014
It's really too bad that you haven't updated in years! You've managed to take in all the characters - even from Destiny - into a believable, plausible plot. Sure, here and there are typos and a few plot holes (whatever happened to Shinn's parents? And, uh, did it ever explain what Durandal was doing - like, what's his job right now, and why's he still able to control so many officers [like Rau] when there seems to be many who still don't know the guy...) but maybe it's just me.

And I simply ADORE the idea of having a friendly relationship with Kira and Stella. I don't think I've ever come across that before. Add to the fact that Mayu and Shinn seem to be in the same boat as Kira (Coordinator against Coordinator) and I'm simply amazed. I'm curious how Shinn will later justify himself when he actually acknowledges that he's fighting "against his own people" - probably when they all go to the Desert Tiger part, right? (! I just realized... oh gosh, it's going to be HILARIOUS when Cagalli enters the scene. I mean, Stella's already in Kira's "little sister" shoes, and then, Cagalli's going to be fighting for that... sorta... when she finds out later... and oh, it'll be hilarious. "I'm his sister!" "No I am!" LOL. Not that literal, but close.)

Well, this has been a fun ride. I hope you'll continue soon! If ever!

-Rayne

PS: Hey, uhm, I'm kinda... erm... well, are the "main characters" going to die off again? I'm really falling in love with your Rusty, and oh, I just HATED it when canon killed Nicol. He was... just... really, he would have been like BFFs with Kira if they actually met. And they will! Right?
northernlion196 chapter 12 . 7/28/2014
The curse of fanfiction

Generic Cringe Worthy Fanfiction? (probably involving recycling word for word 80-90% of the source material)

Gets finished within half a year

Unique and Well Thought Out Altered Fanfciton?

Will have huge build up, and then get abandoned.

Cant you at least give an authors note chapter to reassure you're still here? Unless you died in real life, in which case that sucks hard core.
Tau Warlord chapter 12 . 4/29/2014
Finally found an interesting slight AU of Seed that doesnt use other gundam series or OCs...Only to find that it hasnt updated in a year. Why is life so cruel.

Really like where everything was going (aside form poor shiho almost dying, noooo!) I especially liked how you portrayed stella being something other than the "typical gundam psycho girl love interest". I admit though it is quite intriguing that you kept the canon ages so everyone from destiny are 2 years younger than they usually are portrayed. And I admit this is one of the few FFs that has kept Rusty alive, that alone makes this story pretty unique.

Although I cant help but imagine Mu getting an eyepatch...
goichi chapter 12 . 2/26/2014
hope this isn't abandoned and i hope for an update because you are doing a really good job without adding oc's. i want too see kira's and lacus romantic relationship be expanded more then what it was. and i also want some murrue, mu,shinn,mayu,kira,and stella friendship and i also hope that you have kira and cagali's brother and sister thing expanded and known. but anyway i hope that your doing alright and that there is nothing wrong.
unafraid chapter 12 . 1/27/2014
Will Luna be appearing soon? I'm really enjoying this story so far.
Guest chapter 12 . 10/4/2013
great story! great chapter! please continue!
mfmxxx chapter 12 . 9/11/2013
Maybe have Mayu mention her susipions to Mu? Would be interesting to see him get involved.
mfmxxx chapter 9 . 9/11/2013
Its really good.

I like how Kira is still the main character, a lot of Gundam fics have the other pilots be marysues and take Kiras role.

Id like to see the Kira-Marrue and Kira-Mu friendships develop, one of my favorite things about the universe tbh

When Cagalli finds out she's Kiras' sister, is she gonna be jealous of Stella?
Yuriski-1st chapter 9 . 9/8/2013
Sorry if maybe I talked about this before, but...I always thought Rau knew very well who (or what) Kira was the first time Athrun mentioned him. I mean, in canon there was never a moment when Le Creuset thought to himself something like: "Holy shit! I had the person I hate most right in front of me the whole time!"
Freefan1412 chapter 2 . 8/14/2013
I re-read this and I noticed you described Stella as Cagalli-like with similar eyes to Kira. That's interesting. Supposedly, if eye-color can change because of Extended-drugs or as a result of Kira's high gene manipulation, this could mean a lot.
Seriously interesting.
I'm looking forward to finding out more.
Freefan1412 chapter 12 . 8/11/2013
Nice work. :) I'm rooting for Mayu here that she'll do something about Flay (needles to say, I can't stand her).
I wonder if it makes a difference that Kira gave Shiho and not Yzark a scar. Shiho doesn't strike me as the type to obsess about it, but on the other hand she is the lone female of the team and some kind of protectiveness and consequent anger might come about.
Keep it up and I'm looking forward to an update. :)
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