|Reviews for Thorn Valley|
| Grey Shoma chapter 26 . 4/8
Loved this story, was not prepared for the emotional gut punch at the end there, regardless I'd like to thank you so much for posting this story. Wishing You Wellness In Health, And The Best of Luck In All Of Your Endeavors.
| mary chapter 26 . 4/2/2016
Well i have a new fictional crush...Justin!
| Guest chapter 15 . 3/21/2015
Aww, Justin's all concerned! X3
| Guest chapter 12 . 3/21/2015
This is amazing! The suspense!
This is how the movie sequel SHOULD have been!
| Guest chapter 11 . 3/21/2015
YAY! WE GET TO SEE JUSTIN AGAIN!
Also, you really went all out in Nicolas' close-minded, delusional, dastardliness, that son of a b-
| Guest chapter 6 . 3/20/2015
Good grief, I started smiling like an idiot when Markus thought Justin was Mrs. Brisby's husband...dude, your story is just awesome! :)
| Guest chapter 1 . 3/20/2015
AND I'VE ONLY JUST READ THE FIRST CHAPTER!
The interaction between Mrs. Brisby and Justin is too cute!
| Samantha Molina chapter 1 . 2/20/2015
| Guest chapter 1 . 2/20/2015
| TurquaTortle chapter 26 . 2/12/2015
I just read through ALL of this, and in my opinion:
THIS FANFIC ALONE PUTS THE SECOND MOVIE TO SHAME!
Honestly, the plot was so brilliant; keeping our favorite as one of the protagonists and not a minor/background character, giving each and every one of the characters a fair amount of screentime -not hogging the entire story to themselves-, NONE of the characters in the movie seem even the slightest bit OOC, and your OC's have great character development and they just fit in with the characters so well instead of sticking out like characters that don't belong…
You should've directed the sequel!
| Guest chapter 26 . 7/23/2013
To Erik Mouse calm down man it's just a story. It is kind of sad but it is pretty well written. To OrganMan I enjoyed this story personally but I would change two things if I were you. First off I think Mrs. Brisby should have fought Nicolas at the end that would have been a cool duel scene. Secondly I thought the ending was too sad. What if it ended with Mrs. Brisby at an old age telling the story to her grandchildren that would have been pretty good. Anyway good story.
| ZabuzasGirl chapter 1 . 6/6/2013
Update immediately, please!
| ChipmunkRaccoon chapter 26 . 7/23/2012
Wow. A powerful story this is.
THIS should've been the sequel to the movie.
| RainEStar3 chapter 26 . 4/9/2012
I loved this story. It was clear, well-written, and a had a magnificent plot.
| RustyPete12 chapter 26 . 2/5/2012
Jeez! What a sad ending... still, the story was awesome! I LOVED IT! Good job!