|Reviews for Change|
| KiwiSox15 chapter 1 . 2/27/2011
I like how you didn't completely describe Parker's story. Leaves us with something to look forward to!
Keep writing :)
| Calliope Muse chapter 1 . 2/19/2011
Ummm... Excuse me? Who said you could steal my arrow? I don't believe I did. ) Haha, but seriously, that is MY arrow.
As for the story, CONGRATS! You finally posted. I'm so proud. So, I'm guessing that Parker's mom left, dad's depressed, Parker's caught in the middle... I liked Jennifer, but you could have done a lot more to describe her, and I don't think Parker would be so willing to trust a complete stranger after all she's been through. You might also want to shed a little more light on why Parker's mom left.
Over all, it was a good first chapter. If you need a beta, you know where to find me. Seriously, you could break into my house if you wanted to. ;)
| The Pineapple Force chapter 1 . 2/12/2011
That was sad! But, good!
I liked your personal touches (Nirvana, Face Down, etc.) a lot :) I could definitely tell that YOU wrote it :D
Can't wait to read more!