Reviews for A New Man
An Author's Pen chapter 1 . 7/22
I like how most of Moriarty's ways of gaining power as a child are normal bullying, with that one outlier of threatening to kill a pet hamster, casually listed among the others like it's of the same magnitude.

Also, it's a interesting idea that he killed Karl to get revenge on other people. It's much more intricate and messed up.

I like how you portray Moriarty as almost hoarding his revenge, savoring it, trying to make it the most elegant it can be - a production, a play. In the end, that desire for the perfect revenge destroys him.
thejacinthsong chapter 1 . 1/6/2012
Very creepy. You really captured how much of a psycho JM is.