Reviews for The Almost Illegal Tea Party
japaneserockergirl chapter 1 . 4/19/2013
Damn, that was...something else. No, wait, I can describe it better than that. It was AMAZING. You've completely deconstructed everyone's fanon-based personalities and somehow, some way, you've done it so superbly. (Not to say that I'm doubting your writing abilities or anything!) You've given so much depth to a character that is usually so neglected or treated so lightly and one-dimensionally. Fantastic job.

japaneserockergirl
phionexxx chapter 1 . 3/2/2013
I love how you portray Bianca in this FIC! It's just so... So... so... JNODONJFEOJFEVNJFEFEVNOJEFGO NJFSIJVBFEINJGFEJKNGJORFN I DONT EVEN KNOW IT'S JUST TOO AMAZING
Endles chapter 1 . 2/27/2013
"Blair Valkoinen was depressed."
It was a nice idea to use different words for black and white as the surnames, but this one really shocked me, because it's not often you see Finnish used in fics... now I'm curious, is there any particular reason you chose to use a Finnish word?

Apart from that, I really enjoyed your take on the characters. Bianca's personality is rarely explored in fics and I thought you did a terrific job, making her a bit darker and deeper than what is shown in the games.
Master Bleach chapter 1 . 8/1/2012
Nice work.
The characterization of everyone was pulled of convincingly.
The tone and flow was also nice.
JujuQue chapter 1 . 7/18/2012
Wow. That was just...amazing. It was definitely a different take on the relationship between the Nuvema kids, and as dark as it was, I found it to be very enticing.

I loved every bit of this fanfic, and now I'm ready to scour through your profile for more great writing like this. Thanks for the fantastic read :)
the cantarella of odile chapter 1 . 12/20/2011
Gorgeous. I've read all of your pokemon drabbles, and have to say that I am completely in love with your style.
Emperor Andross chapter 1 . 6/9/2011
Wow! That's pretty heavy. A good read, but really heavy.
Gagagamer101 chapter 1 . 5/8/2011
Wow. This story was very powerful. It actually made me hate Touko too! One of my favorite stories by you.
terra-cotta-warrior chapter 1 . 3/11/2011
Wow...that was...wow...idk...it was so good but...I never imagined Bianca so...dark...and that really made me HATE HATE HATE White...

Bianca is a better actor that I thought!

Well, I liked it. But sad!
H A R U K Y A chapter 1 . 3/1/2011
Wow. I would never had thought that Bel could be so manipulative and dark. I always thought of her as the ditzy cheery girl. You made me sort of hate White here. She was so, what's the word..., I don't know. xD

Anyways, an entertaining read. It's truly something new.
Pokesteel chapter 1 . 2/18/2011
Aww Bel is jealous, great fic though, keep up the good work!
xbluexrainx chapter 1 . 2/12/2011
I found this very interesting... I love how Bianca seems to be so innocent in sweet in most fics/the game and in this you made her, well... have an interesting backstory.

I've always loved the White/Black pairing, along with the Cheren/Bianca pairing. It brought a tear to the eye when White kissed Cheren.

I think Bianca deserves more attention. :)
CoffeeIncluded chapter 1 . 2/11/2011
...Wow. This is pretty grim, and not at all how I imagine these characters (Well, except for the fact that in my story Bianca's a good actress, but I digress), but still, the fact that I enjoyed this one-shot means that you really did a good job. Also, Bianca kinda reminds me of Iago (From Shakespeare's Othello) here. Again, a very good job.