Reviews for The Practice of Love, Outtakes and Extras
SLKerouac chapter 4 . 9/13/2014
Will is trying to be himself but it is hard with Edward. Will pushes and then Edward pulls back. They are so much alike. Edward just doesn't want his son to make the same mistakes that he made when he was younger but Will is having a problem with that. So alike!
SLKerouac chapter 3 . 9/13/2014
A little time remembering when it all started. Bella by herself with Edward showing up unexpected. Playing what happened a year ago when Edward and Bella first met. It was an afternoon of taking care of each other and loving each other. What a time they had!
SLKerouac chapter 2 . 9/13/2014
Edward is with Nessie and Will in the kitchen. will is eating peas and his first words was something that Edward used a lot. Nessie knew what Will was trying to say. She was laughing and now Edward knew too. Bella has just walked into the house and she heard that Will had said two words. She comes into the kitchen to a disaster of peas everywhere. Edward got Will to say mama. Bella was so happy that Will called for her. Edward was going to tell Bella but Nessie told her that Mama was his first word. Nessie saved Edward again giving the bottle of cleaner to him. Edward should have known what Will's first word would be with a father like he had. Son like father! Funny!
SLKerouac chapter 1 . 9/13/2014
The morning of the wedding. Bella is sad but knew this day was coming. Edward had other ideas for the morning. Bella knew they did not have a lot of time and wanted it hard and fast. Ness is now calling them and she finds them still in bed. Edward is being funny but Ness doesn't think it is. What a morning to start the wedding day. Nice outtake!
cappcat chapter 8 . 5/20/2014
Thanks for this and the original of course! Both brilliant!
twirob chapter 8 . 12/3/2013
wow! this last one! you still havent explained why they didnt change their name? you havent pressed complete yet so hopefully thers more to come ;)
sandraev1 chapter 8 . 8/18/2013
No wonder Edward was so scared for will to go down that same path. I'm glad Bella was there for Edward. Thanks
sandraev1 chapter 7 . 8/18/2013
I'm glad will walked away. He kinda listen to Edward too. Thanks
sandraev1 chapter 2 . 8/17/2013
Aww that's was cute! Thanks
lmc123 chapter 7 . 6/22/2013
God I love will, that was a lovely story
That'sMzPeachesTYVM chapter 8 . 6/17/2013
That was a heavy way to end it all... But it definitely
shines a light on the bitter-sweet depth of their love!
That'sMzPeachesTYVM chapter 7 . 6/17/2013
Yay! They BOTH made the right choice tonight.
That'sMzPeachesTYVM chapter 6 . 6/17/2013
I think Will is a bit more understandable,
reading this chapter...
That'sMzPeachesTYVM chapter 5 . 6/17/2013
Will's a little shit!
That'sMzPeachesTYVM chapter 4 . 6/17/2013
I'm so glad you just kept writing!
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