Reviews for The Practice of Love, Outtakes and Extras
That'sMzPeachesTYVM chapter 3 . 6/17/2013
Wow... That was kinda kinky-hot! LOL
That'sMzPeachesTYVM chapter 2 . 6/17/2013
OMG... My sides ache from laughing so
"Fuh-ing" hard!
Sian xxxnxxx chapter 8 . 4/10/2013
I have just finished reading The Practice of Love and the out takes, I know it's a while since you wrote it but I wanted to let you know how much I enjoyed it, the story was so beautifully written and emotional. I truly felt like I was personally involved in the story,I loved the funny and cute parts and the way four yer old Ness sounded very much like my 4 year old youngest son, I cried at so many points throughout this,it was truly a great story xxx
Lafemmevegeta chapter 8 . 3/20/2013
Loved the story between Will and Edward. I'm sure Bella already suspected there were men involved in Edwards past. Great outtakes for the story. Thank you!
Lafemmevegeta chapter 2 . 3/19/2013
Haha! Too funny! It was inevitable...
ficfangirl chapter 8 . 11/3/2012
You actually made me feel sorry for Tanya, although her actions didn't really ask for sympathy. Viewing her feelings through the likely feelings of Jake helps immensely. Good call. Thanks for sharing.
ficfangirl chapter 7 . 11/3/2012
I don't usually like to follow the adventures of the kids, but you made Will's story interesting. Thanks for sharing.
Judyblue95 chapter 2 . 10/26/2012
LOL! Like father like son.
Capricorn75 chapter 3 . 6/28/2012
God, this was the hottest thing ever!
Capricorn75 chapter 8 . 5/20/2012
Oh my gosh, I need more. I need more of these two. I know it's been over a year, but...please? How about the first time Ness started calling Edward just Daddy. Not daddyinalongtimekindaway ?
biteme22 chapter 8 . 4/2/2012
Enjoyed the outtakes and extras...I am going to miss this family.
misstito1988 chapter 8 . 3/8/2012
Your story is one of my favorites out here. Very moving, very emotional, and I very realistic. I like your Edward, the fact that he deals with homeless kids. But I think the best admirable trait about him that I love is how he cares for his kids. Yes, maybe he can be a bit overbearing but that's because of his fears from his past. I could be the only person here who sides with him when he caught Will smoking pot with Becca's tits on display. Lol. I think every dad would have the same reaction regardless of whether or not they have the same fears as Edward, or if they had the same past as he does. Yes, Will is a kid, but that doesn't mean that what he did was right. So anyway I love your Edward.
Tee Hill chapter 8 . 2/5/2012
this has always been a favorite story :))))))))
dbpbatm chapter 8 . 1/19/2012
These were a good addition to the main story!
MoCullen chapter 8 . 12/4/2011
Poor Edward, I'm glad he got the help he needed.
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