Reviews for in my darkest hour
mrt123 chapter 2 . 3/29/2013
you have a good plot and main idea but you need help with your writing and the example i believe that it would be better if feelings and descriptions are in separate paragraphs from the dialogues.I think a beta reader is all you need to help you with your writing
mrt123 chapter 1 . 3/29/2013
interesting.i hope the following chapters will be longer
vampires -edward 96 chapter 4 . 6/24/2011
updata soon :)
Annalisa89 chapter 4 . 4/23/2011
I really like it post soon..Happy Easter!
Damon the meercat chapter 4 . 4/22/2011
im still interested in beiing the beta babe n the story was great i almost forgot it was u who wrote it its so profesional lol luv u xxxxxxxx
feja chapter 4 . 4/15/2011
Jesus that's a though life.
twilightobession chapter 4 . 4/4/2011
I can not believe that Edward is just going to leave her hanging there. Wished the chapters were longer.
Dragz1991 chapter 4 . 4/2/2011
please update soon!
melissamary55 chapter 4 . 4/1/2011
love it update soon is a really good story and where is alice
aabc chapter 4 . 3/31/2011
Edward is a mean bastard. This may sound strange but a little communication would help her comply. Interesting plot.
kim chapter 4 . 3/31/2011
Storys great! Update soon!
koodarae chapter 4 . 3/31/2011
It was good
SweetiePieSaysHi chapter 4 . 3/31/2011
Love it. Hope to see more soon.
Dragz1991 chapter 3 . 3/7/2011
please update soon!
twilightobession chapter 3 . 3/7/2011
Hope you update tomorrow. Can no wait to see what other "tormenting" Edward has for Bella.
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