|Reviews for Hold It Aganist Me|
| rav chapter 9 . 2/15/2014
| aholebullsheet chapter 1 . 11/4/2012
Oh, god how will Alexander react?
| angelallie15 chapter 7 . 6/22/2012
I'm sad that a really good story had to end here :(
| Mrs. Drusilla Malfoy-Salvatore chapter 7 . 3/15/2012
Love it, plz plz plz update soon
| InfernoXXAngel chapter 6 . 2/9/2012
Oh god, whatever is Raven doing? That bad-ass, update soon 3
| sweetrevengexx chapter 3 . 1/3/2012
I like the story, but you do need to watch out for your paragraph development and the tone of your characters.
Add more detail so people know what is going on and so they know how people are feeling.
Also watch out for things like run-on sentences and such, because it's hard for people to read.
We get the idea of what you're saying, but you really should try to add some more detail.
You've already got a lovely story going on, you just need to work on it a bit harder.
Really work at grabbing our attention and you'll be doing very well. :)
| InfernoXXAngel chapter 4 . 12/19/2011
Nice story, you should write more
| Kris Ivashkov25 chapter 4 . 11/30/2011
I love it. Update soon.
| Ms. Nosferatu chapter 4 . 9/19/2011
u should rlly update soon this stories rlly good
| Aria chapter 4 . 6/28/2011
5 days my ass xD Lol. Please update :P
| loventherussian17 chapter 4 . 4/29/2011
great story so far cant wait to see what happens next
| Natty96 chapter 3 . 3/26/2011
awesome plz update soon:o)
| ForeverInJustice chapter 1 . 3/18/2011
I want more :)
| AkiGirl22 chapter 3 . 3/12/2011
Go for it!
Congratulations! Your wish will
now come true in your age minutes.
Now follow this carefully...it
can be very rewarding!
If you repost this within the next 5 min.
something major that you've been wanting
This is scary!
The phone will ring right after you repost!
| Lena-Rae chapter 2 . 2/17/2011
its good but try and make it more discriptive k :D update