|Reviews for one shot fired|
| Mysterymagik chapter 3 . 12/19/2012
Great story. Do you think you could get some one to check your work, spelling etc? I got most of what it was, but its just kind of irritating because a lot of them seem to be simple mistakes that can be easily avoided.
Other than that, great story. :)
| Tess chapter 4 . 11/18/2012
Update! You said you wanted ideas but...the only thing I have to say is I would love to see more Max in your story cause he was my favorite!
| Guest chapter 4 . 8/24/2012
It was good but I think you need to do some spell check. Also I don't think they would be nice enough to ask them their names and I think you need to read it over so it makes more sense. But good job for the most part.
| kittykatkitkat chapter 4 . 8/26/2011
update update UPDATE!
| becca chapter 1 . 5/31/2011
wow that was cruel not jk i liked alot
| Volleyball10 chapter 1 . 4/28/2011
Great story! update soon please!