Reviews for Flocking Movement
Guest chapter 54 . 4/11
this was a sad ending. five entered the tunnel. only four walked out again. i imagine the unnamed is going to be something like this. u rock, xazz!
Guest chapter 53 . 4/11
the irony of pluto's words that the proeathans can give des what he wants more than anything, meaning lucy, is that the proeathans are responsible for him losing her in the first place. (hello, juno?) u rock, xazz!
Guest chapter 52 . 4/11
des' insight that Andrew is kept up by ghosts at night... that reminds me of how you've portrayed altair... kept up by his ghosts at night. altair would hate that he had anything in common with Andrew. u rock, xazz.
Guest chapter 51 . 4/11
shaun lied to des again about andrew. and he wonders why des has trust issues with him and becca? u rock, xazz!
Guest chapter 50 . 4/11
what fortune has cain hidden away to ensure he has whatever he wants? u rock, xazz!
Guest chapter 49 . 4/10
des thought here he wanted to go to sleep and never wake up. the proeathans gave him one heck of a wish fulfillment on that one. u rock, xazz!
Guest chapter 48 . 4/10
what was the plan to destroy humanity before eve unleashed hell on earth on the proeathans to save what was left of her people and give them some sort of future? u rock, xazz!
Guest chapter 47 . 4/10
how did Saturn become a stadalla if des needed hawk's experiment gone awry to turn on his powers, for lack of a better way of describing this? u rock, xazz!
Guest chapter 46 . 4/10
in oottt, does the flock still have those implants and use them to communicate with each other or has hawk taken them out as obsolete now that he has real proeathan tech to play with? u rock, xazz!
Guest chapter 45 . 4/10
who or what is the Sixth? I can't remember that being answered in your saga, xazz. u rock, xazz!
Guest chapter 44 . 4/9
altair must be on pins and needles as he waits to see if his visions from nearly a thousand years ago come true at atlantis and des ends this endless war. u rock, xazz!
Guest chapter 43 . 4/9
best family dinner ever. u rock, xazz!
Guest chapter 42 . 4/9
now that hawk has access to proeathan tech and knowledge in Demeter, i wonder how much more he's learned and improved upon proeathan tech? they'd hate a human being smarter than them. u rock, xazz!
Guest chapter 41 . 4/9
des asks altair to teach him something more useful than resisting the e'dn's control. but that is literally the most valuable lesson altair gave him. how to resist proeathan control. especially with the atoll and unnamed coming up. u rock, xazz!
Guest chapter 40 . 4/9
i can't even imagine the grief of Jacob's poor mothers when they lost their second and last child. i wonder how andrew felt when des ran away and he lost his second and last child? u rock, xazz!
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