I tried to give this story a chance but you seem to be all over the place from chapter to chapter so I'm not going to continue.

The flow of this story just doesn't work

Your making Kate seem like a moron in that it's taking her this long to get a clue as to why Castle is mad.

Really enjoyed , thankyou

Nice!

Awesome ending. Quite a roller coaster ride. Thank you

Oh man... Nice job, buddy

Wow, pretty heart breaking chapter. As a devoted mom myself, Castle's thoughts and worry for Alexis really hit me. That whole scene was fantastic. You are really pulling n my heart strings right now. Very we'll done. Thanks.

I can't imagine people complaining about where the story is going. If I don't like a story I just quit reading. I am so appreciative of the people who share their stories with me! I know the time and energy required, so please be courteous to fic authors! Thanks for sharing your stories.

Great chapter. I am really enjoying this story! I could really feel Castle's anguish. Thanks for sharing.

Whoa! This was just. Whoa. Wow. It hurt my feelings, but it was also awesome!

this was a great chapter. I read it twice before going on to the next chapter.

A 3 chapter smut scene, that's a little overbaord.

I know some of you won't agree with me on this but I think Kate was kind of a bitch in this chapter.

Can we get back to the damn Ring!