I am still new to FF and just discovered your story i enjoyed... An a final that brought a wink and a smile... sending Castle to the Police Academy...meet the Rookie, a couple of years in advance

Why is your Castle so unlikeable ?

What a stupid chapter, you wanted to create drama but it just made your characters dumb and your fic crappy

Uh sorry but Josh is way more handsome than the fat Castle

I enjoyed the read! Thanks for sharing :) I look forward to checking out your other works.

Found this story on a list of Recommended Castle FanFiction classics, and I can see why it made the list. It was an amazing story. I loved it so much. Thanks!

Thank you. Love it so much. I read only Castle.

I love your story. I just have 7 more chapters to go. Will definitely finish it. I read only Castle.

Amazing

I like that word 2

I love your story. I never liked Josh. How your story flowed is great. I read only Castle.

I love it. I read only Castle

I love it. I read only Castle.

I love a righteously angry alexis defending her father.

I was with you until the end of the chapter. I really don't mind angst stories, I just don't care for stupid characters. She knows that castle was heartbroken over the ring. He tells her all those nice things outside her door and then they make love and don't have the casual sex she's always experienced. He tells her that he hasn't slept with anybody since Gina, indirectly telling her that sex with her matters. How any rational person can draw the conclusion she did is unfathomable to me. Again, I don't mind angst I just can't handle that level of stupid in a character as smart as Beckham is in the show.