Reviews for Caving In
sand beneath our feet chapter 2 . 1/27
Oh my gosh this is so good!
Anyka17 chapter 2 . 5/26/2016
GOD, I LOVED IT! I loved the way you wrote James and Lily, and the construction of the story, and everything was just perfect and funny and perfect... Definitely one of the best fics I've read. Hope you are doing well, and still writing!
Unknown chapter 2 . 5/10/2016
Awesome story... Loved it!
Guest chapter 2 . 8/31/2015
I thought that this was an adorable story from start to right before the finish. Then, I saw the lines "Unbeknownst to the pair, Dumbledore had orchestrated the whole event. Popcorn was involved.", and just about died. Tricky Dumbledore!
Guest chapter 2 . 5/31/2015
So stupid. Lily's character behaved like such a conceded selfish bitch.
Mr.Potter- The Stag chapter 2 . 8/10/2014
Gosh! Dumbledore? Who could had known? XD

Amazing! Love this!

Much love,
Look at my pen id, duh! ;)
MagicalGirl85 chapter 2 . 8/14/2013
MagicalGirl85 chapter 1 . 8/14/2013
I love this too much for words. My dad got mad at me for giggling too much.
petrichorandperennials chapter 2 . 7/21/2013
This is lovely. So very lovely. And the ending is really, truly perfect. I am such a sucker for first kiss stories. Oh man.
akindredspirit chapter 2 . 6/10/2013
This is lovely! Adorably James-and-Lily
LilyXJames chapter 2 . 3/23/2013
Great story wish u could make it longer
The last part was so funny Dombeldore and popcorn lol :)
Dani chapter 1 . 2/18/2013
Lovely story brilliant work :)
The Lord of Insomnia chapter 2 . 1/15/2013
is this ever going to be updated?
wildwriterrr chapter 2 . 12/29/2012
This is brilliant, I am in love, thank you for making my life. Also I love their dialogue; you write so well! Your flow is strong and I enjoy your wit quite a bit. I also love how you've grasped James and Lily. You've done wonderfully xxx
OnginalMaz chapter 2 . 11/3/2012
Wouldn't be surprised if he did, when he's not being a BAMF he's such a lovable weirdo 3
Beautifully written.
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