it has good elements buy so many things make no sense at all and also shinji acts so out of character , its an ok story even with its problems

Love it. Very unique.

It’s been a long time digifruit…. we miss you

So the second Shinji was made post-Impact... but why? She got together with Gendo then, so...

Aside from which, was Gendo impotent or something? To clone a baby version of Shinji when there's an adult... it seems like an odd choice to make. Although him not being Gendo's child now makes a lot of sense in regards to how Gendo gave absolutely no fucks about his well being.

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Wow. That was... a wonderful plot twist. Good job!

It was beautiful.
Heartfelt, believeable, and warming.
It is nice to know you can still find a good story out there, and wish i had came across it sooner.
I look foward to reading your other works.
-James (fallen_angel_james yahoo . com)

Wow, this was a very good story.

I especially liked how you brought in some good, non-telegraphed twists.

cuuuute

I love it how you start one plot-line and bring in some more, before resolving them all in fantastic ending. You just can't find that in most of the newer fics anymore.

This is a very good and well Shinji/Hikari while I do favor Shinji/Rei however I do like Shinji with other Evangelion females except for Asuka but don't get me wrong I actually have a rather neutral attitude to Asuka for the most part.

Also this is one of the longest one shots I have ever read in quite a while this is pretty good.

I absolutely loved this. It was beatiful and well written and featured my favorite pairing. I love how you had them interacting together, it's just how i imagined it would be if they ever bothered to put this pairing in the serious. I can't really find anything wrong with this and i thought the twist with Shinji being a clone was uniques, i havn't seen that before. anyway awesome job.

The K-On references made me smile, though I'm surprized Mugi and Ritsu were absent.

Wow, this was so cute! I was really confused when Yui was talking to Shinji, but then you revealed that she married a man named Shinji (who took her name too oddly enough) and named her kid after he died during Second Impact. Very nice touch, though the 'Second' Shinji was confusing, what with the whole clone thing. Nice though, that it got Kaji to finally settle down. Poor Asuka, all alone again. (I don't like Asuka in most cases, so I'm bias-ly happy here) I really am disappointed at how few ShinjiHikari stories there are. I mean, yeah, its a left wing pairing, but it makes a lot more sense than ShinjiAsuka (which makes as much sense as SasukeNaruto pairings: "I tried to rip out your heart all that time ago because I love you, man, now be my boyfriend or I'll stab you again." only its, "Baka, make my lunch, don't touch me, stop looking at me, hey you idiot, pay attention to me when I'm talking to you!" but that is based on the original anime and most of the manga (I hear she's not as bad in the Rebuild) I digress...) and ShinjiRei makes me feel bad, cuz it's some kinda incest (Yui Lilith Rei, Shinji's half-Angel half-sister; Yui Lilith Rei, clone of Shinji's MOM; Rei, Shinji's (somehow) distant cousin... Sister, Mom, Cousin, all bad if its non platonic! And lets not forget her personality, or lack there of as far as outwardly appearing goes. (I used to be a ShinjiRei shipper, but then this main thought popped in my head and its just ew.) but with ShinjiHikari, she's sweet and considerate and is far more accepting of him than any other girls he knows, besides Mana (another nice touch, throwing her in as the Student President), and he doesn't do stupid and/or perverted things that piss her off like Touji seems to always do. I mean, throw in his different quirks (like the ones from the manga and such) and they wouldn't be completely dull and it would be nice to see Shinji get a girl who isn't going to bash him over the head for or question the purpose behind offering her flowers or something or endlessly tease him over something (it was also nice seeing Shinji do the teasing for once), but also needs to able and willing to put him in his place, especially if he starts getting depressed.

I do have to ask though, is that last bit on the SDAT, is this 'epilogue' set more like when they're in college, likely living together and most likely celebrating their however many year anniversary as a couple (if not already married or engaged by this point)? Cuz I'm hoping so, cuz before I saw Hikari's name in that section, I thought it was Yui still with the (soon to be) Ikari Shinji I, then Hikari's name came up at the end and I got confused and then worked it out and I guess I just want confirmation that there isn't a second Hikari that knows a Shinji...

Great story, and I loved all the cute moments Shinji and Hikari shared!

As a romantic, I have to say I love your stories, the ones I've read anyway. Shinji being a clone was a BIG surprise that I never would have thought of coming. I liked how you wrote Yui to be, she was quite funny.

Good Luck In Life And Writing!